Reviews for Eye of the Beholder
Corpium 1/17/11 . chapter 4
Oh, and yes, I understand the funny puns and play on words you use for chapter titles. I like'em. :)
Madd Girl 1/17/11 . chapter 5
You're basing Harry off of Ciel from Black Butler aren't you. Very nice. Ravenclaw seems like a safe option. At least he'll be able to hang with who he wants and not be seen as evil. Great chapter!
Corpium 1/17/11 . chapter 5
And another awesome chapter! (Sorry to hear that you didn't win the lottery :P) I'm really glad you decided to put Harry in Ravenclaw. I think it really fits his current character. And I loved the ending of this chapter. We all knew something would happen, but we didn't know what, and I think you pulled it off quite well. Good job and happy writing! :D
Tashio 1/17/11 . chapter 5
Is it Ciel Phantomhive that your basing Harry on.

Wonderful story by the way. Till next time.
lady.edgecombe 1/17/11 . chapter 5
actually I kind of like the cane. It gives a little bit difference to the character. Of course, if he gets mad at someone, he can always hit them over the head with it. Or perhaps learn how to project his magic through it. Perhaps it has a secret core?
Anon 1/17/11 . chapter 5
It must be very... disorienting seeing yourself through someone else.

Great chapter!
ElementalFoxGoddess 1/16/11 . chapter 4
update soon! This is interesting...hey when you mean a Harry/Voldemort pontential, do u mean what I think u mean? Slash?
dogsby 1/16/11 . chapter 4
I can't wait to see what happens, if he starts to himself, looking back through Voldemort's eyes, in class.
Corpium 1/16/11 . chapter 4
And again, I really like this. I know you said you were worried about the description, but trust me, writing descriptively takes a lot of time, but it makes the experience for the reader go by so much faster. I really enjoy the description. I also love your take on Harry's eye. I've never seen anything like it, and I think it'll add a really intriguing twist to the story. I've said this already, but I'll say it again. I love your version of Harry's character. I'm glad you haven't turned him into a mini-Voldemort. Had canon Harry grown up in the same environment, I can totally see his character turning out this way. Good job, and happy writing! :)
Peltra 1/16/11 . chapter 4
is he still covering his eye?
Athey 1/16/11 . chapter 4
Looking forward to chapter five. :)
00 1/16/11 . chapter 1
more story please
Gemini Peverell 1/16/11 . chapter 4
Loving every chapter of this story! _
npetrenko 1/16/11 . chapter 4
Nice chapter. More please!
Des 1/16/11 . chapter 4
I like where this is going! Please continue!
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