It's good to know that the swords or so polite and smart around each other, after all you know what they say, a good sword is a SHARP sword, sorry for the bad pun, keep up the good work.

yup.. that was very good...

it felt powerful!

I am not good... sorry..

question..

So was it the Tenseiga that said... ahh but I have taught him not to need you..

Yup... Sorry me slow...

but that was very good very good! thanks for the wonderful poem!

But why did you choose to list the character as Takemaru?

LOVE it sis! Unique, and very well written :):) I rather enjoyed that.

Sorry it's anonymous i'm too lazy to log in :P hahaha.

Abbs :)

Ah, this story was very cool. And if I am not mistaken, Sesshoumaru's sword won. Love it.

Very well done; I like the emotions that run through it. Tenseiga did have the harder job, I think. Teaching one to grow stronger through defense is easier; teaching one compassion for one's fellow man, infinitely harder. Again, well done!

Inuyasha won't learn about himself and to be stronger without Tessaiga.

Sesshoumaru won't learn about human's heart without Tenseiga.

Both are equally a strong and powerful swords. It is certainly an important lesson that Inu no taisho want both of his son to learn.

Thanks for sharing such a wonderful tale. _

Wow! I love it!

I got it all the way to the end, and thought too hard on who said they won, so please help me out LMAO! It should be obvious but like I said I'm thinking to hard on it