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Fantasy Cat 2/10/11 . chapter 17
AW! Such a beautiful fic. I could love this forever. You remember that other story idea that you told me about but said someone else beat you to it? Well I think you should do your story anyway. Because I'm that bored and I need my fic fix. Pwetty please? Love ya lots.
Cerulean.Phoenix7 2/8/11 . chapter 17
Yay they made it back :)

I loved the bit with the Observers at the ending :D Anything with an Observer connection just intrigues me even more.

And we're at the end of another fic...sigh I hope you post more soon, I really enjoy reading your stories :)
noz4a2 2/8/11 . chapter 17
Happy ending & family good. Yeah.
boronia-lee 2/8/11 . chapter 16
Ahh! Inconvenient timing, much? haha. Great chapter, you had me terrified there for a second!
helikesitheymikey 2/7/11 . chapter 16
YEY BBQ! they're toasted and dead right?

so...Peter might just yet deliver his baby. is FauxElizabeth gonna still turn up? she'll probably still be a threat if she is.

how did they cross over anyway?

what about the attendants who were gonna kill the baby? are they humans or shape shifters?

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Cerulean.Phoenix7 2/7/11 . chapter 16
Uh Oh.

That is why you don't mess with an angry Peter.

Oh no, Liv is going to have her kid while in the hands of Walternate? At least Peter is there for her, hopefully Walternate comes to his senses...for once.

Great job, I really liked what you did with Peter in this chapter and the slow build up of his emotions that eventually made him crack, great job :)

Update soon!
theonethatgotawayx3 2/7/11 . chapter 16
OH MY GOD, OH MY GOD, WHY. Can't believe there's only one more to go.
Fantasy Cat 2/7/11 . chapter 16
Oh my! Only one more chap to go!
Kaslyna too lazy to log in 2/7/11 . chapter 16
Shit.
noz4a2 2/7/11 . chapter 16
Damn. Intense. Looks like Peter will have to deliver his daughter after all. Update soon.
helikesitheymikey 2/7/11 . chapter 15
methinks we're about to see rabid/feral/possessive/protective/PO'ed Peter come out...I doubt Walternate will survive the encounter.

hopefully the baby and/or Olivia's abilities will emerge with all the emotions going on...it would be a good time for some BBQ-ed shape shifters don't you think?

LOVE IT!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

btw, better not kill Livy, Peter or their baby. will the Observer interfere I wonder...
Fantasy Cat 2/6/11 . chapter 15
Aw man. I've been ill all week. Thus why I have been so behind on reviews. I love the incorporation of the Observer in chap 13. And yes I was screaming "NO!" like mad the moment Thomas Newton was mentioned because I knew what was coming. You have me on pins and needles now seeing what the final two chaps will bring. I will be so sad when this fic ends though.
Cerulean.Phoenix7 2/6/11 . chapter 15
DUN DUN DUN DUNN... I knew they were in trouble the minute that man said he was Newton. This isn't good news for Peter and Olivia.
noz4a2 2/6/11 . chapter 15
Holy fraking shit. Damn. Oh no. Uh-oh. Crap. Shit. Fuck. That is NOT good. Cliffies are a bitch. Update like right now.
Kaslyna 2/6/11 . chapter 15
Dun. Dun. Dun.
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