Renne: *shows up at the beach the day after*
Corobo: _

Poor Renee. when i lost one of my people for good i cried for like a couple hours. if i ever lost alice one of my hardened veterans that has been there by my side since day 1 i wouldn't ever recover.

It's a simple little story, and I must admit that the lead character's utter devotion struck me as a tad odd, probably because of the age/height difference. Regardless, I was intrigued by what you've written, and do hope that you continue writing fascinating stories in days to come.