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chris 2/8/12 . chapter 63
you did good on this chapter,the stories flowing fine.
chris 2/8/12 . chapter 60
yeah i live in america,yes some americans are jerks and they have morals that don't quite fit with the century we're in,then theres others like me who don't care if your gay straight or down right asexual,i am bi,and it dosen't matter what others think,you have to live life for yourself and no other person.i know this is tmi but like i said you got to live life for yourself and no other,personally i think jen needs someone in her life to balance out the hurts she has gone through,and yet still has to live through,if that means she gets her comfort from another girl,who are the readers to complain?.
chris 2/8/12 . chapter 49
damn why'd you have to make jen an eptilectic,she was fine just the way she was,it's hard enough when your abused but to throw in epilepsy thats a hard pill to take,and i speak from expeirence there,now i really feel sorry for jen.
chris 2/8/12 . chapter 46
hehehe the three witches,burn burn,toil and trouble,watch as this cauldron boils and bubbles,otherwise known as the three sisters of fate,hehehehehe!.
chris 2/8/12 . chapter 38
magic is like an e.m.p. pulse to electronics,it makes them stop working because it interferes with how it passes through the circuits and makes it jump eraticaly,so theoreticaly if you could find a way to shield the electricity from magic,say using some form of magic nullifying charm built into the casing of the eltronics and the surface glass of the screen,and into the chips transistors and motherboards of the item you might be able to use a cell phone in hogwarts,but seeing as it live things and leylines that generate magic,it's in the blood so to speak,and generated by the earths magnetic field,it would be hard to make an area to make the shielding.

you would have to have what we in the electronics business and in goverment circles call a "CLEAN ROOM",somewhere sheilded from all contaiminents and outside influeses such as magnetic flux,dirt,cat dander,dog fur,or even human skin cells.

now the way this is done to block magnetics is to put copper tubing in the walls to block magnetic flux,having screens in the airways to block dirt particles,and for the humans to wear suits so that the skin cells can't enter the enviroment.
chris 2/7/12 . chapter 34
um did you watch way to much emelio estaveses movie "freejack" as you've taken julias name from the lead woman when you call her "jules".not that i don't like it,but it is slightly weird hearing it.
chris 2/7/12 . chapter 15
normally when i read a fic i'll not reveiw till i get to the end and do a reveiw but this is a really excellent continuation of your fic the student in question and the story between draco and julie and how their relationship is starting is mirroring professor snapes and proffessor grangers.

thank you ever so much for writing this and i hope life and your muse give you the time and inspiration to keep writing fics or books.
chris 2/7/12 . chapter 11
i read your epic story the student in question,witch i'm assuming this is the sequal to,and draco DID take the muggle studies class with cass,that is why draco turned awy from voldy-shorts and joined the light side,because of what cass taught about the holocaust.
dontcallmemadeline 1/22/10 . chapter 15
I'm not sure if you've noticed/been told, but there's a really random glitchy thing in the middle of this page. It goes:

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f dislike very moderately.

Anyways, that... I didn't know if you could fix it or evenif you knew about it, so i thought i would point it out. In a related note, great job so far, and i'm going to keep reading soon!
Author Name Changed 12/22/07 . chapter 71
Oh, the DRAMA of it all! And the twists and the only soap opera thingy I ever liked.

HURRAY! *kisses Jan.*
Author Name Changed 12/17/07 . chapter 29
Ai-ia. I'd say tell them both, play them both and get them in a threesome. mr...

*would seriously have done that in reality, except she didn't know the other guy intimately enough to ask him to join in... even if he had been joking about it*
Author Name Changed 12/17/07 . chapter 24
Disagree! Liking two guys at once (and dating them both) isn't an evil thing! It can be really god... Know what i mean? :P
Author Name Changed 12/7/07 . chapter 18
I know i read this before, but i like it anyway
Author Name Changed 12/6/07 . chapter 3
"Sure. What’s the worst it could possibly do to me?"

*can think of a few things*
Author Name Changed 12/6/07 . chapter 2
ZOMG! A very good Sorting Hat song! *is surprised* That's something you don't find often.

*likes it so far*

*knows that if the author hasn't finished this story she probably never will*

*doesn't care*
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