Eames and Arthur never stop competing, do they? Even over little kids love lol. I swear, you're the best Inception fan fiction writer of all time, no joke :)

Poor Eames :( His story was so sad, actually everyone seems to have a pretty sucky family life. It's all very well written and amazing though :D

What a lovely way to end your story! I loved the way you brought the phrase "please don't" full circle, really nice finishing touch.

The part where Arthur quips about Eames taking Phillipa to bed made me laugh out loud. I've never anyone being called a "perverted fruitbag," but I'm pretty sure thats the best thing I've heard all week! Great job on your story, and happy writing to you! ;

"Please don't"... all this time (I've been following the story for a while) I've been wondering why that was the title and I chalked it up to a bad writer... but here it is, the last words... brilliant!

Awwwwwwwwwwww, I loved this chapter. It is sad that it is the end.

I loved the little Philippa/Eames moment. That was just adorable. And I love how you ended this chapter with the story's title.

Hey I just found this story today and i read it all (which is not a short read), anyway i just wanted to say its really good and keep it up! :D

The hide and seek part made me laugh a lot. But when i was reading this I sometimes forgot it was in Coob's narrative.

awww so cute i love this

Awesome! Hope you update the chat story too.

"AH, BULLSH-...crap." HAAHAHA! This was probably your funniest chapter so far! Good work! ;

I love the image of Eames hiding in a closet... Wish it was my closet... *goofy grin*

Awww, I love this chapter, and the little A/A moment at the end was super cute. I loved this scene, "Pick up, pick up!" he cried sweetly, and Ariadne, being the maternal person, bent down to pick him up, forcing Arthur to release her waist. Arthur looked at me, his mouth agape, as if he could not believe his girlfriend just rejected him for a 4 year old." it was so funny, Arthur and James fighting for Ariadne's attention. Hope you update soon.

"We're in a relationship..." LOL. Delightful, as usual. I actually just watched Inception and it ended like 10 minutes ago, so the characters are very fresh in my head right now, which made reading this even more hilarious. Good work! ;

I love thisss story! just one thing...in this chapter they're teasing arthur about having a thing for ariadne, but in earlier chapters, he refers to her as his girlfriend to them. I'm so not criticizing here, i was just a little confused. Just to be clear, I really love this story.