CUTENESS OVERLOAD!

Look at the first sentence of this fic, paying particular attention to the tenses used. See the problem? Also, I'm pretty sure Remus wants to go to 'bed,' not 'be'. Also, Remus should say 'I don't have any' instead of 'I don't having any'. Other than that, me gusta. Mi piace. I like it.

I think the ending was great! A really good story, lots of emotion and nice setting out, well done.

"He feels a sense of sick satisfaction when he sees the hurt flash through Sirius' eyes."

Love love love this line. :D

Haha!F***** loves him?Lool,nice one,i liked the overall emotion here,good work!

I loved it, though I hated those girls. They were awful. I hope their boobs get saggy and their legs develop flab. They deserve it.

Loved it! And I like the ending...leaves it to our imaginations! :)

xoxo

Just one piece of concrit: "I just want to shower and go to be," You missed the 'd' at the end of 'bed'.

But other than that, lovely! I look forward to reading the sequel after I finish typing this.

Keep writing,

Petticoats

"It might not make perfect sense, but it's Sirius, so he understands." - I like this very much.

I loved this. Very nicely done. And the ending didn't suck, chill. :D

i liked it.

That ending did NOT suck. At all :D though it was short, and there was no smut, I loveloveloved it!

I can't believe those whores said about Remus, I felt so bad for him, I almost started crying! But then Sirius... "I fucking love you!" ah, I just adored it :')

Another absolutely amazing fic

YAY! .

I looooooooove when they get jealous. D

I did like the ending, I just had to read it twice to understand it was about that part about spilling bloood or semen to get it.

The title makes sense because Remus is all territorial about Sirius, but it feels more that's abot reasurence of Remus beauty and...not-boringness? xD

Anyhow, I really liked the fic and it's going dtraight to my favorites!

This was really good! poor Remus all confused and hurt and then surprisingly unobservant. YAY for Sirius' boldness! Those girls needed to be slapped! Grrrr, insulting my (...I mean Sirius') moony like that.

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