OMIGOSH! I love this story! The only problem is I read this how long ago and it's still not updated! For the love all mankind! PLEASE! I beg of you! UPDATE!

this is really good please update this story! 3 3 3

"Die Levrear!"

This is pretty interesting. Love it. I kinda like the idea of Allen and Rose falling in love. It's just an opinion, do whatever you want.

I like the idea, I would like to see more in the future if possible.

i looooooove this story! please continue!

Just began reading this today and liking it already! Cool story, but it'll be a lot better if you would update soon though! Please, update soon! Looking forward to your next update,

TheRandomGirl

loving it!

although I would rather have Allen in Allen's body and have Neah and Crown Clown being all overly protective :P

But so far so good! At least this is first in a while where the story is actually readable with correct grammar

make it that when they take allen home , that the noahs kill allen halfway then the excoricst find him take him to the order after 10 days they know its allen / oh and allen uses his inocence to get out the room. Ü oh and love it

Sorry it took me foooorrrr eeevveeerr to review.

Had a lot on my plate lately, havent even been able to finish my new chapter.

Anyways, amazing chapter!

I feel so bad for Rose, what kind of family is that?

And i hope Lavi is feeling bad for what he did. I absolutely love Lavi, and i think it is a cool twist that he did something like that but hes still naughty naughty haha

Oh shoot! They are going after Rose (Black Rose)! Run Rose/Black Rose/Allen! Who knows what will happen!

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

it's really interesting, update soon (:

I wanna different pairing! \(-.-)/

AllenxLenalee! Well, that my fav. pairing. But this is your story, so you're the one who decide it.

Hmm... I wonder.. Where Neah? What happen to him? I hope in the next chapter you'll explain it.

I'm curious!

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Okay, I'm blank. So, can't give any tips for you.

Ganbatte! I know you can.

I'll be waiting for the next chapter! UPDATE SOON!

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FastReview (FR)

Okay, since ch. 3 is re-published, I'll be re-reviews, too!

Now, I understand what happened there.

Hmm, and Neah sure would look cute with his twelve years old form. I want to see Neah with that form!

Haa ...!

So you've written previous chapter 3 when watching a movie? Don't do it again .. You will be confused if you do so many things in the same time.

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Well, good work! Keep it like that!

Is my review is too long? Ah, by the way, the length of the story is perfect!

Now, I'll read the next chapter!

See you!

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FastReview (FR)

Yay Thanks for updating so quickly. Im really enjoying this story so keep up the good work.