Really great thought and great writing :D

I really liked it!

I loved it. It's very different from the usual Mentalist fics and I liked this very much. I am all for a sequel but tha _t is your decision. Keep up the great writing!

I really like this. It's very different than other end scenarios I've read which makes it special. But it's also written in a way where I can actually imagine this happening. Love the angst of Lisbon coming to visit him; Jane "exsorcizing" his dream, her tragically thinking that's what he wanted, then gulitily wandering if it would have Bern better to let him kill RJ if it meant he'd still be him... Very raw powrful stuff but written simply with nice subtlety; my favorite style. Thanks for this, it's awesome.

Aww! That was so beautiful! *wipes tear from eye* Nice story!

It works! Great short story.

Aw this is really great and sad and cute.

That was intense. I enjoyed it very much.

You've chosen a writing style and plot for this story that is quite difficult but you've done it very well.

Wow, angsty! I do enjoy reading bittersweet stories once in a while. Very well written.

I liked this very much. I wish I could say something a bit more insightful, but unfortunately, it's all I can come up with. It's really, really good :)

Great one shot. I really enjoyed it.

I think the suspense worked really well. First i thought Jane was in prison and RJ dead; then that both were in prison and finally the actual situation was revealed. I like your writing style. Must admit i laughed at the darkly comic image of Jane fingerprinting a dead Lisbon and her thinking that was his way of letting her know what he thought. It seemed twisted yet strangely hilarious. Hope u write more.

I think the suspense worked really well. First i thought Jane was in prison and RJ dead; then that both were in prison and finally the actual situation was revealed. I like your writing style. Must admit i laughed at the darkly comic image of Jane fingerprinting a dead Lisbon and her thinking that was his way of letting her know what he thought. It seemed twisted yet strangely hilarious. Hope u write more.

I absolutely adored this. Great writing. :)

Great story. Just the right level of angst I think.