Wow, sadistic sakuke

CUTE!

0.O Wow! No! DEI! DON'T GO IN THE LOCKER ROOM, RUN! Hehe, Gaara and Temari are in the story now- can't wait to see what they do. _ Nicely done!

-Nic

Aw! So cute! Nicely done, but like I wrote before, you need to work on when it's appropreit(sp?) to put things like 'screeched' and 'yelled' 'answered' 'asked' etc. because that could make it very confusing and stuff... Like I doubt you ment for Konan to screech in a time like this: ''Hmm, what my help'' Konan screeched. So yeah... Nice.

-Nic

omg this is sooo awesome XDD i love it what is sasori going to do XDD is sasori going to beat sasuke and itachi up XDD why does sasuke hate deidara so much i guess i'll find out next chapter lolz this is awesome what happens next i want the next chapter out now XDD

Le-gasp! I so didn't see that coming. Hehe, just kiddng, of course I did! Konan's a therapist! What does that make Pein...? Haha, Nicely done!

-Nic

Aww...! Sasori is Deidara's angel! Sasuke and Itachi are such meanies! Your writing has improved a lot and your fic. just leaves me on the edge of my seat, begging for more. Nicely done.

-Nic

Nice! I love it. And it just keeps getting better. I don't like Sasuke. Sasori needs to get out of the closet! And soon! Well... they do say denial is the first (I think) stage for recovery. _

-Nic

Nice! So cute! I hope Sasori admits that he likes Deidara soon. Sasuke can just go jump off something- meanie. (No! Anime version of Sasuke, I didn't mean you just... this version...) Yeah. Nicely done, you're getting A LOT better with grammer/etc. things. I think you use the word 'added' to many times, and not for the right reasons- not just 'added' in particular, but with things like 'Sasori yelled.' etc. Instead of saying 'said' or 'added' when someone is answering anothers questions, then just say 'anwsered'(sp?) or anything that makes sense. I love this lots, espicially the summary.

-Nic