|Reviews for Chronicle One: The Last Moments Of Innocence|
| Lady Ifrit 6/19/12 . chapter 5
I really like your portrayal of their history and I hope you do find time to write Chronicle Two - it'd be great to see more of this. I liked the way you fleshed out Dick's parents and made them such a sweet family that I couldn't help but go 'Aww!' as well as other members of the circus and otherwise very minor characters that wouldn't get more than a passing mention.
Thanks for sharing!
| fujimiya 3/31/12 . chapter 4
your history are the best i read.
if interest, you will read lots from circus life in comics like nightwih year one and batman and robin all stars. Nightwing too have things going
Nightwing are the legal ower of circus now, haly its dead and richard are the choised heir
thanks for the fic *.*
| Tiger Lily Roar 12/8/11 . chapter 5
Whoa! This is fantastic! I love the modern take on it and the characters are perfectly portrayed! Everything literally breathed for me! It was so... real! Does that make sense? It does to me, I just don't know how else to describe it. I am enthralled by this and I can't wait for your next installment.
| Ish 11/25/11 . chapter 1
Amazing! I'm looking forward eagerly to the next installment of this fantastic story.
| kayel29 10/4/11 . chapter 5
This fic was great! Thank you for sharing! I would love to see more!
| Arrienete 9/28/11 . chapter 5
You are awesome and I am so thankful you are writing again. It is nice to know I am not the only one obsessed with Dick grayson. Please never take a long break again and never let anyone convince you that your writing is inferior because believe me you rock.
| shad0wraith 8/11/11 . chapter 5
Wow, really loved this. Can't wait to see more!
| Silver-ShadowSpark 8/4/11 . chapter 5
Hi, I think you might remember me. I'm Laurel's daughter - the co-author of Sufficiently Advanced Technology. I'm glad you started writing again and I'm really looking forward to the next part in this series.
| SubRosa7 7/25/11 . chapter 4
I really like the way that you've portrayed young Dick and his circus family. I can't wait to see him as Batman's apprentice.
| SubRosa7 7/25/11 . chapter 5
I've really enjoyed all of your stories that I've read including this one, and am excited to see where you go with it next!
| Lil' Kanny 7/18/11 . chapter 5
Oh, what a beautiful fic. I love the way you always write about Dick and Bruce. This is how I always imagine the begining of their relationship. Now I can't wait to read more. I hope you are able to warite Chronicle 2 soon.
Again, a great story and very well writen. As you already know, you have a fan of you here!
Thanks for sharing!
| Lil Kanny 7/18/11 . chapter 3
I'm loving this fic so far! I like stories about their day to day life or showing them doing normal things. I like your idea for this fic/series. You are right, Dick's way of meeting Bruce and his beginning as Robin have changed many times over the years. For me, Dick meet Bruce and started their relationship when Dick was 8 years old. Like you said, their relationship would be different if he started training as Robin when he is like 14.
So, I like what you are doing with this fic. I really loved this chapter. Now, I'm going to continue to read the rest of the fic.
Thanks for sharing it with all of us! And keep writing!
| Alhana-Antilles 7/11/11 . chapter 5
"With all due respect, he's just witnessed his parents fall to their deaths. Seeing you will only scare him."
"No. He's seen the worst thing he'll ever see in his life. Nothing will ever truly scare him again."
I really like these lines. They are very in character I think.
"The child looked surprised and curious, not afraid. 'Why are you wearing a costume?'
Batman felt a bolt of admiration. This boy was the first who had ever seen him for what he really was - a man in a costume. Others saw a creature of the night, some sort of supernatural demon – exactly the perception Batman worked hard to cultivate. However, make-up and costumes were a part of this boy's world. He had an intimate understanding of make-believe and performance. When the costumes came off, all that was left was a human being."
This is a really great moment. Dick and Bruce connecting for the first time- hints if things to come.
Overall, great work. I enjoyed seeing Gordon and Bullock as well, and I look forward to the next story.
| Jedi Ani Unduli 7/10/11 . chapter 5
That promise at the end... I like it.
| AuthoressCrest 7/10/11 . chapter 5
OMGosh, Dick! :(
I'm not sure I like that they didn't want to tell Dick about his parents but I think I understand why Ellison did it. Feel so horrible for Dick for when he is told, poor kid.
Loved how Dick wasn't intimidated by Batman, lol. It was kind of adorable. xD