I've been reading through your stories ... AGAIN, and couldn't remember that I've ever read this one. The only thing better than Jayne Cobb is five Cobb brothers. I know this story is over a year old and designated complete, but what a lovely multi-chapter this would be! You've managed to make all of the boys so appealing, even without the background provided in "The Chosen One". I just enjoyed this so much that I wish there was more!

There was totally a point to this: awesomeness in the form of the Cobb brothers. This was really cute! I loved it.

Very nice to see the brothers doing their knight errantry gig (and doing it so well, especially where they can be admired by a bunch of sisters who are similarly outcast).

If you get a chance to fix the typos, you've got 'glad' where I'm sure you meant 'glade' in the first line, and then there's a repeated use of "brother's" (singular possessive) in place of "brothers" (simple plural), and the same for "sister's" (belonging to one sister) where you mean "sisters" (more than one sister).

I took a great pleasure reading about the "lovely boys in action"! Thank you!

The Ko girls seem made for the Cobb boys. Kinda like a consolation prize for not meeting River first. I love fan fiction, the possibilities are endless and there's the oppertunity for everyone to be a winner. Such a sweet little aside.