lol! did you get the inspiration for this chappie from Amelia Bedelia? Man, I used to love reading those books in kindergarden through third grade! If i ever find one again, I am so buying it!

Hmm... not my... favorite pairing, but I think it bears watching.

I thought this was great. If I were the author, then I probably wouldn't write a sequel just to torture the readers. Yes, I am evil. Anyways... I loved it! This is one of the best Slayers fics ever written.
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This story is amazing. (and Xelloss is so Evil!) It can't get any better (and Xelloss is so Evil!) Its as good as The Slayers Trilogy by Twoflower (who isn't on ), and that is probably the best Slayers fic of all time (and Xelloss is so wonderfully Evil!). You have everyone in character so perfectly. In a lot of stories they use Xelloss as humor, or make him (gasp) fall in love all mushily. That isn't IC for him. (Its also the one mistake of Trilogy) You capture the true Xelloss so nicely. I love it! (and he's so Evil!) You get the idea I really like it when Xelloss is evil? Because I do. I'm going to make my friends read this now. They think Xel is evil too, even if they don't like him as much as me. I bet they'll love your story, the same way I do.

- Dragonet of Ice, the queen of doodles (cheese doodles not included)

Xellos, you #$%*&! I can't believe how he managed to con his way in and kick Val out. Smooth story.

OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! I FEEL LIKE A LITTLE GIRL ON CHRISTAMS! THAT WAS BRILIANT! I don't believe it! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! (Please, excuse my childish giddiness!) AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH! WONDERFUL! You are simply the most wonderful author! I applaud you! Excuse my being repitive but that was simply brilliant! Thank you so much for posting this please hurry with the sequel ... it's killing me! CrimsonFire

Hey! I'm sorry I haven't r/r in so long! That was so sweet! Poor Val ... Lol Filia is so shy ... That was awesome writing. I've g2g but keep up the great work! CrimsonFire

Too amazing for mere words. One of the best Filia/Val stories out there. And now I've just started reading your sequel.

Damn, Xellos is one evil S.O.B. This love triangle between the characters was amazing and had great tension. Even though I'm a straight X/F fan, this was one good story.

::sniffles.:: Such a wonderful story, but such a sad ending! Please, please,please, please, please, please PLEASE! For all that is good and right in the world! Write the next book! I'm just dying of the suspense! x.x

WOW! This is just a great fic! And it's WONDERFUL news to hear you will be making a sequel. Xellos is just amazing in this story, as well as Filia and Valgaav. Their personalities are just so complex and detailed. And the looks into Valgaav past's was extremely well-done. Very real and detailed. The hints into dragonian culture was fascinating as well. It gave the story a more solid feeling.

I would have thought that Valgaav got over his 'egg' thing but apparently not. So that was a big surprise.

*sighs dreamily* It so neat that Xellos got Filia in the end, although she doesn't return his feelings. At least, I don't she does. Hmmm... But anyway, since there's going to a sequel Xellos probably won't have her for long and Valgaav will. Ah well, maybe Xellos will get her in another story. ;)

Your stories are the bomb! And your webpage is kicking too. Cannot wait for the sequels to Illusion of Truth.

That was excellant! I can't wait for the next saga. Yeah, Val/Filia fics.

::clutches dragon plushie, blowing nose:: That's so great! I love Val, he's possibly the coolest (and angsty-est) dragon out there. But he can't let Xellos win (although I do like that Mazoku). Write more before I reread this a second time!

Oh, you'd *better* continue this. And quickly.

Gack. ; Sorry I'm seeming so ungrateful... It's just that you left this story at the most terrible cliffhanger! I can't think of anything else at the moment; I just really hope you write more. The chapter was very, very good, as well as suspenseful and so on. I liked it- but it has to be one of the biggest cliffhangers I've seen in a long time. Yes, I will most certainly read the sequel when you write it!