First, I want to thank you for the time and effort you put into this story; especially since it took you so long to get around to finishing it. A lot of people give up way too easily when it doesn't get finished fast enough.

Secondly, I wanted to say a great big "THANK YOU OH SO MUCH" for having the decency to ensure that it was A) spell checked B) properly punctuated C) used correct grammar all the way through and D) set in a readable format. I can't even begin to tell you how many fics I've started to read in the last ten years that I wound up giving up on because of the numerous errors driving me crazy. lol Not that it's much of a drive anyway.

In any case, I thoroughly enjoyed this story from beginning to end. You did a great job keeping the characters in character and kept the story flowing at a clean, natural pace. Your descriptive ability never once became distracting or overwhelming. I'm very, very impressed and I greatly look forward to finding more of your work. I usually go through thousands on a single subject before I find one gem such as yours. And, even then they have defects. Yours was found in less than one hundred SG-1 recommended fics to read. I have zero complaints. That's the first time in the last five years that I've been so pleasantly surprised.

In short, thank you for giving me hope of finding more worthwhile reading material.

Ace! This was a great fic, and if you hadn't have pointed it out I wouldn't have known it was your first. The plot is very well thought out, the characters well captured and the story well paced. Well done x

Oh - another cliffhanger! *reads on*

Wow! Beautiful description and a cliffhanger, too! *applauds* x

Oh, the plot thickens *g* I'm really enjoying this! x

Oh, very intriguing! Can't wait to read on and see what it all means :) Also, you've captured the character voices really well, especially Daniel in the briefing - nice one! x

You said that there is only one more chapter to go on this, and that was 1 year, 8 months, and 30 days ago, so, WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO FINISH THIS!

Nice one, write more soon! An as for my story, no theres not a sequal yet, as this one isn't finished! You didnt think I'd leave it like that did ya? ;)

Great story, I need more, keep up the excellent work

Cool, more please.

Goodie! New chapter. I love this story and am really glad you are still working on it. Nothing like a good SG-1 mystery. Eagerly awaiting the next part!

Love your work! So when is this going to be updated?

You tried to e-mail me, but it didn't work, could you try again. It was in reference to an update on your story "Time's Arrow". Thanks!

Please finish, this sounds good. Thanks!

This is good