*dances about happily* That. Was. AWESOME! I was kinda worried when I saw it was only 3 chapters, but it was perfect! Scott and John got hurt *likes her favorite characters injured*, and John was so cute, and so was Scott *LOVES her favorite characters in protective-brother mode*. Excellent characterization, imagery, and details. And that author's note at the end of chapter 2? Brilliant, and hilarious. I LOVED it.

Just reread your story - enjoyed it as much as the last time - well done!

now that was really good honey, loved that so much xx

loleth im laughing is really good

Wow um how are they going to get the shoes out? Brilliant!

I love this story, it is so cute! I really like the way you write the boys and it was just... so adorable! And Mandy is a bitch, go Scott for getting rid of her! I really like the bit when they wake up in the morning, and Johnny is stuck in the corner, hehehe!

Ooooooh I'm loving this, what a wonderful chapter, that was such a great reconciliation for the boys and I love Jeffs observations. You really are a great storyteller. Please keep it up, I'm loving your stories:)

Awww, That was all kinds of fluffy. Marshmallowy fluffy to go with the hot chocolate maybe? So nice to see them all of one accord again. Loved how they all ended up sleeping together. John waiting until his brothers awakened rather than just crawling over them was sweet. and well,of course Virgil got up. Somebody walked off with his pillow! Loved how Jeff saw the the clues but just let it go. Especially after the scam the three of them pulled on him. So long as his boys were together again that was all he really cared about. Really nice little story here! thanks

What a great story!

You portrayed the teenagers perfectly in their unreasonableness yet the way they pulled together in the end is pure Tracy. I liked that you didn't prolong the angst like some stories do. Having Jeff disregard the broken rules for the sheer pleasure of gettng human teenager back is exactly what most parents would do.

Another lovely story Loopstagirl, thank you. Can't wait for your next one. :)

great ending

Ah wow that was such a perfect ending to the story with just a hint of a follow up. You really know how to cheer a girl up and who wouldn't be caught up by all that cuteness. Loved Virgil's acting and the way Jeff didn't buy it for a sec. Absolutely brill and I can't wait for what you come up with next. love ya

See, I was so desperate to exonerate myself that my finger slipped and I ended up sending the review before I'd actually reviewed! (Typing very carefully now!) As I was saying, I'm not the villain anymore - yay!

Anyway, the chapter... it was lovely. I really like scenes of the boys as boys, especially when it's all warm and fluffy. So much to love in this one - Virg and John hiding Scott's drink, falling asleep together, Jeff's pride in his sons, Virg's attempt to play the stroppy teenager just to save his brothers. I really enjoyed this one.

And John was in his dressing gown! That really made me laugh!

Hope this prolific phase continues!

Bee

I think you're just digging that hole a little deeper for yourself there! But at least I'm not

i am guessing it was the "look" from andy! that i was meant to be looking out for?

and we all hide some from each other too! proper family! lol

righty it was really good!

do we get a chapter 4 and a bollocking from Jeff? or do they forget about the boots for aaaaages and they randomly get found? or i dunnno! he he

xxx

Well done on another wonderful Tracy story, Loopstagirl! Just one little thing, you should have added a fluff warning for this update. lol

I loved the scene with Jeff seeing his three boys cuddled together. Even better was the kitchen scene and how Jeff just knew they were up to something.

Excellent story all the way around!