Such a drama, huh? Well, good story... LOL

SO cute! Cute cute cute cute doo doo doo..eheheh...Yeah, CUTE! Me likey the story!

Kae-chin

IS THAT IT? IS THAT THE END! WHERE IS THE REST? COME ON THAT'S SOO NOT FAIR!

hi uhh i like ur story but in this chapter how Taichi and Yamato finally hook-ed up is like SOO no real it's just kinda a little fake. I think you should try and re-do that piece but hey it's ur choice

That was so...perfect! Hah. Really quite nice. There were so many little things that I liked about this story! Like the fact that Taichi's comfort food of choice is cereal, and that Yamato likes to put flowers in the rooms he cleans, and the romantic-consultation duo of Mimi and Sora, and how Koushiro likes to drink martinis in solitude. The little details like that made the story very enjoyable! I mean, the bigger things did too, of course, like the Taito and the kissing and the angsting and the romance...but all together, it made a great little package, and I really liked it! :D

Omigod, I think I just died, that was so sweet and emotional. Like, I felt my heart burst and I was like, "Crap, I died, but it was worth it!" Haha. ; Just thought I'd mention that, before I finish up the story.

Before I continue on with the rest of the story, I just have to say that I love the way you had Sora describe Yamato in this chapter. I mean, it seems obvious, him being a musician and pretty emotional at some points, that he would be a passionate person, but I guess I never thought of it in those words, so though it's a simple description, it's really fitting, so it became more than just a little adjective. I dunno, I just liked it! It made me smile and consider moreso the way I characterize Yamato in my mind. So, awesome.

Oh, and I love Taichi's confused, "Yamato pees on the floor?" Cracked me up. ; Alright, on with the rest of the story!

Noo! How could you just end it like that? Arg! Anyway, I really really liked it! Koushiro and Mimi were really funny, and Yamato and his cleaning obsession too! Great job!

Kawaii desu ne! Yamato-san no kawaii, ne? Eto...sumimasen; that japanese class is really getting to me. Wonderful story, I hope you update soon, go Taito, and..I have to study now, sorry. yoku dekimashita! and keep it up!

*grumbles about shukudai*

-Art

My heart is bleeding? Hahahaha...I have a friend that also says this embarassing and corny things when hes drunk and brooding. Ether that or he says, "I love you, darling. But only cause Im drunk.", or even better," God is love and youre a god. Come and love, baby." He sounds like Austin Powers.

such a swt story hopfull ull come around to a sequal!

Neurotic anal-retentive Yamato is so kawaii! Love Mimi's reaction in chapter... eight I think, classic. Good job! Not too OOC, cept for Kou-chan, but I like what you did with him. on the Chai thing since I love Iced Chai's and think it's horrible to go without them, mention Starbucks to your friends in Tokyo, there is a bunch there and thats were I get my Chai's. YAY! MORE TAITO! Kay, rambling... going now.

wow, I wish I'd found this on ffnet first, rather than your website! Then I could have written a review when it was still fresh.. Heh, this is actually sort of like a fic I started.. I really remember liking this though -

Lavie... *sniffles* I wish I'd found your address first, rather than your site address, yanno? I really -like- writing reviews. But I like writing them AS I read. And no matter how much I adore you... *cuddles* My most "constructive"/interesting reviews are those written as I read. And I'm too lazy to reread this soon.
You would have gotten nine spastic reviews that way, not one half-assed one. I mean... All authors love praise! *beams* I'll possibly review the other chapters sometime. Just don't hold your breath. Anywho... I -did- read the whole thing. All in one sitting. And I liked it- whiny Yamato and everything. *giggle* I do think he's whiny. You've found a "kindred spirit" or whatever. *snerk* Don't mind me. -You- know I was up all night. But Taichi? Taichi is t3h s3x, ne? I sort of got that off of you... XD So yeah.
Fluffiness at the end: *drool.*
The birthday cake: *endless sniggers* I quoted that at my friend Mel. Had to. It was just -too- pretty.
Also... I've got two quotes off of you and this story in my profile on AIM now. Because they're just LOVELY. Koushiro and Mimi, yes yes! I mean... One quote for each, respectively.
Finally: Pr0n! You needs must write me pr0n. I don't -care- if you think it's bad. Argh... I wish I had the nerve to rp with you and/or Rae. I can show my crappy original writing to people, but not crappy fanfiction... Not crappy fanfiction roleplaying... And I needs must RP, to get good at writing digi-ness. Someday, I'll write Taisuke for you, hey?
I just need a bit of a concept. See, I can't do plot. I'd end up doing PWP sorta stuff. I like creating my own characters- FOR the character interaction. I can do interaction, more or less. I'd have to write my own digi-personality synopsis-things... Before I'd be happy even doing the romantic-fluff I'd want to do... But... Yeah! You've almost motivated me enough to write fanfiction. Feel happy. I really want to drag Taichi and Daisuke off to my alternate realities to be fluffy and interact and have PLOT.
Main reason I don't do fanfiction: all the good plots have been played out already, either in the actual story or other fanfiction. Leaving PWP stories. I could do that... But it just doesn't feel... I don't know... It feels like gyping whatever audience I get. I should be able to present an audience with both romantic fluff AND a plot, before I can call myself an author!
Don't mind me. I turned this review into an introspective rant. But... I don't know, I'll just bank on the half-knowledge that you'll enjoy it. I haven't wanted to write lately. I have four original stories I need to work on, and I want to write... I just don't want to write those stories. So I wrote a slashy, original one-shot. Got myself to finish a chapter for one of the stories that I'd been working on after that. But now? I -still- want to write. I -still- don't want to write those stories. I'm confused.
You know what I should do? Write fanfiction. Bad fanfiction. Bad taisuke fanfiction. For you, because you and taichi-who-has-taken-over-your-brain deserve worship. . Goggle boys! I -will- do this! ...Eventually. First... Argh... I can't re-watch the entire first and second series. I'll browse the web for refresher-synopsis-things. I -will- write non-crap fluff! Pretty one-shot ness... And then... *planning*
I am fuggin' INSANE. Love me. I love you, I love this story, I love Taichi-t3h-s3x. *worship*
*Lira-chan*
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KAWAII NE!*pouts* this is the last chapter? no fair...*hopeful look* Sequel? *begging* please? (sorry, gotta love fluff) Well...Great story! I am now off to check any other story you may have written and your favorite's list...*slinks off*