Ah you have to update...please! It's sooo good.

Ireally love this story, it gives a pairing that is vastly underused and the future devlopments for the charecters is exelent, I could easly imagine Tim becoming that cold given all that happened in the past. PLEASE , PLEASE , PLEASE! add more chapters soon.

Oh, I love Jason, he's so adorable when he's insane. When I read "S

red again" I started singing The Red in my head... okay that was too many rhyming words... Oh, right, great story.

I love how you write Jason, he's adorably insane. Oh, I think you mixed up itch with scratch somewhere in Tim's point of view. Great story.

Poor Damian. Can't wait to see what happens next.

"Get off your delicate lily white ass and help me, jerk." - best line hehe; Damina is great *gg*

I loved Timothys breakdown, Tim crying always is so heartbreaking and beautiful and I love it when Damian comforts him. hach. 3

this was such an intense chapter. o..O god. and so sweet when they say they love each other and it was nice to see Timothy trust Damian so much that he lets him take away his control and Damian was so sweet when he broke down and said that he does not want that Tim will go and Tim promised that he will not leave Gotham.

- Timothy's fragility is terrible, and perversely alluring, to see. -

Yeah Damian, I also think so. I loved it when Damian comforted timothy, when his ocd overcame him with full force. I loved it really. :-) OCD Damian comforts the other little bird you made my really happy.

I love possesive Damian :-)

hmm you potrayed connor kind of dumb hmm it is not how I see him and how I see the friendhsip of timothy and him but I think for this story it is nessesary... so I do not mind.

your story is truly unique. Really. woow.

I would love to see some connor tim interaction. I adore them - when they just friends or when they together - they are soooo adorable and great and hach.. my favourite characters in the comics.

This was also a great chapter and Tims ocd is permanent. I liked that and damian and timothy are truly messed up in many ways :-)

Sorry still once for my shallow last comment about the paring but I can not help myself. I am truly ashamed. :-(

To the last chapter - I loved Damians line - "You should stop that. You have nice hands. Don't ruin them." :-) You made me really happy.

I loved this chapter. It was very intense and I loved it how Damian wants to break Timothy, to controll him and that he is so attracted to the former Red Robin/Robin.

You write them so well. woow and I love Damians pov. Really. :-)

hey!

I read yet a few couple of chapters of your wonderful story and I have to say I adore it. Really, there are no words who can describe how much I adore and love the way you write. I love the plot, who seems so difficult to predict what will happen next. I also adore how you write the whole batfamily, insane Jason, damian who seems so matured and really more like Bruce than ever not only because he looks like Bruce broad and really tall but also kind of dark and on the other side he is a little bit like Dick kind despite he shows it not openly. I always imagined Damian would be really tall and broad when he was fully grown and Timothy will remain delicate and small. I also loved it how you write Timothy, which his ocd tendencies (I love them :-)) and him trying always to be in control over the whole situation, despite he can not control all. I always imagined Tim’s ocd will be become worse because of all the loses he has to endure and all the stress, and his ever changing live( I don’t not now if it is canon that he has ocd, but everytime I read the robin /red robin comics I have the feeling he has strong control issues) . I loved it how you potrayed Tim also in his way not to allow human contact, for me he was always kind of an asexual person, love interests never had a priority in his life in the past and also now. I love it how you describe how terrible it is for Timothy to be touched and he was nearly molested in this fanfiction. I am so glad Damian was there to help him although he thought first he helped a woman (yeah tim – you have to admit you look really feminine) and also was able to convince him that he has to stay temporarily. Damians apology was so sad and so truly amazing and honest. Great.

Tim is also such a mess, such a broken person. He seems so fragile like broken glass and he seems so desperate to gain control. I have to say again, I loved it when he tries to gain control with all the hand washing, his neatly way to do things, his anal way to keep all clean. Kind of creepy but this is the Timothy I love. (with his control issues I also thought all the time will I read the comics, that he is the potential anorexic person o….O really…but that is only random)

So to Damian. He despite I do not like him much in the comics, he has matured in your story. He tries to hold everything together despite it must be terrible to do all this alone. Handle his friend, Jason, Dick and now Alfred is death. It must be so terrible for him. Really. He seems despite all so strong and also as Batman – but he is not Bruce and despite he matured – it must be hard for him to deal with all the mess alone.

I am so curious what will happens next. You are a wonderful writer. Thank you. Really.

cain-chan

p.s.: I hope this will not make you angry or insult you but I have to say I would love – when they two become a couple, that Damian would be the dominant part in their relationship. I can not imagine that he will be not on top. Tim is so more delicate and his character I thing is more passive. Sorry that I wrote something so shallow, really but it is for my personally – that has nothing to do with your writing – really hard to follow a story were timothy is the dominant part. ;-)

p.p.s: I would really like to know how Tim could be in any sexual relationship hehe and what will happen to the batfamily and also to whole gotham. Will there be a batman and robin?

p.p.p.s Your writing is amazing. Truly. Amazing

wow...vicki is just an insane bitch D: I just love when jason forces himself to be sane again. It's just so...I don't even know how to describe at the moment but it was touching.

Another great chapter that I am obliged to thank you for! ;3

Oh, oh, oh...As much as I love this story and as horribly addicted I am to it, there was just one nagging little thing that bothered me: Tim being ok with Jason killing Vicki. I know Tim supposed to be a cold, heartless, bastard, but I think he would still refrain from that kind of vengeance if only out of respect to Bruce's memory. After all, that is the only rule they have.

Besides, I think it would be ultimately more satisfying if the Wayne boys, what with them all being highly intelligent, resourceful, stoney bad-asses who also happen to be infinitely rich and powerful, merely destroyed her life until she wished she were dead. Like wreck her credibility so no one would believe her even if she did out them. She'd never be able to work again and that would be the ultimate punishment for Vicki Vale.

On a high note, I believe I said before that I love how you write Jason's scenes and his shift into sanity gave me a type of glee that I can't describe here. So delightfully sociopathic! XD And it gives a mild nod of Jason being like the Joker. And of course I internally cheered when he shot down the press. Go Jay!