I like it, the eeriness of it. The way it sort of had a contagiousness in it. I just wonder why he had to kill them. It would have been nice to know.

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Great job.

Ah, I absolutely love stories that set you on the edge of one's seat, and this is one of them for sure! Fantastic job of setting the mood as well as the surprise ending up - when Sakura's head whipped around, I could mentally envision it so clearly!

Okay, this definitely get high marks for a creepy ending!

Chilling! I enjoyed reading it, Zombie.

Oooh, very nice! I heart the Poe man and you did a really good job of leaving me with the slight creeps. I'd be terribly interested to see what you could do with a KakaSaku Annabel Lee or Shadow-A Parable. Although that last one could really encompass every character, I think, and be fitting.

Anyway. Nicely done as always, and thanks for sharing!

Wow, incredible atmosphere, I felt goose bumps reading this. It's oddly frightning to see Kakashi so out of sorts. I was hypnotised after that first scene in the road at night.

Great work!

KakaSaku rocks