hi, I love what you have of this story so far. I remember reading it a long time back and was wondering if you might ever complete it... I hope so, I would love to know what happens to Omi next. Well, I hope to see more of your work. thnx!

poor little omiitchi. I really have to workon saying something other then that.. nice cliffhanger.. Can't wait to read the rest

N-NANI? You *pokes* left it there? How cruel can you get? *stops poking and begs shamelessly* Onegai... finish it before I kill myself.. you would, ne? ONEGAI... *insert omi's puppy-dog eyes and pouts*

Oooh! I'm sure the fur will fly when Youji gets a hold of Manx and finds out that she sent Omi on a mission!

Wounded Aya...waaaah!

Angsty Youji...more, more! :-)

*glare*

that was mean. I hate you. I really do.

There are a few grammatical errors that I'm not going to comment on *sorry... I really have to work on that*

But the cliffhanger thing? Good touch.

"Hmmmm...it turned out differently than I'd planned, but them's the breaks, I guess."

Annoying isn't it? Damn the story..it's not allowed to change your mind like that huh?

anwyays. It's good. It's fun. Keep up.

i just love it *sniff*...write mooorrreee!

Oh c'mon.. I think a few "biffs" or "pows" would've fit right in there...

"holy cheap plotdevice, Batman" huh? Sweet.. nice to see Old school Batman hasn't died out all together!

No, it was still fun, and you know what..Omi had damn well better have a few knives on him.. i mean seriously? Guys with knoves/swords are cooler then guys with darts..

Although I think guys with bows have serious potential

*coughLegolascough*

Ahem.. Sorry.

Well, Aya didn't lie to Ken since he just didn't bother to tell Ken where he was going. That's one way to avoid it. Omi however...

*scratches head* So what is Manx up to?

I like your writing style. Please, continue. It's always fun delving into Yohji's mind.

"The Little Things" - how true

Yohji obviously still has problems if it's affecting him so badly. Omi is only going to be gone for a short time. I guess he has trouble trusting that.

Enjoyed it. Looking forward to more. _

This is off to a very nice start. I love the way your stories explore the characters' emotions. I'll be looking forward to the next part. And did you ever finish part 5 of "Perfect Day"?