| Reviews for Birthday Gifts |
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Rakster 5/1/13 . chapter 3This story is awesome! Please update it again. |
Guest 3/17/13 . chapter 3 Really good story. Both humorous and romantically enticing. I hope you continue with more chapters down the road. It would really be something if the story ends with a huge harem lemon of some kind. I think Negi hooking up with all 31 of his students plus whoever else you add could turn out as a funny, satisfying ending. |
james.hartman.7161 3/7/13 . chapter 3Oh my god. Oh my god I am fucking dying. This is just so fucking chaotic, smooth, and absolutely hilarious? Is there going to be an orgy? Is it going to be the biggest lemon of all time. I am so fucking elated! Hurry and update you douche! |
Mellow Dias 1/28/13 . chapter 1In one hand, I should tell the kid to take Misa to bed and have the happiest birthday of his life. But in the other hand, I should tell him keep to hiding girls in his small apartment for everyone's amusement and for the freaking insane hilarity! In my mind, I'm thinking that he keep hiding girls and being freaked our and/or scared until Sakurako and Madoka turn ups. But that's just me. Great job, and I'm going to read the next chapters. Until then, keep writing! |
Akuma-Heika 8/22/12 . chapter 3I would be all for Nagi being fucked to death and Arika going to her son. PLEASE! With the 40 plus names you add listed on the board its doable! You even had her say she had contingencies! If Negi and last a slong as Jack in stanima as a 10 year old than at 18 he is motherfucking Christ (for my fellow Christians I apologize for my language but with all of these months of waiting for an update I am going to make a large comparison with some language lol). Konoe Konoeko is dead...how did you resurrect her? "Wait a minute, what do you mean you had plenty of time to rest while we were separated? You were —" "And I rested while I was," Arika interrupted. Explanation? Hell you might as well have them all go into a diorama sphere and not come out until tomorrow evening...or a few days have maids check up on them and come out unable to walk and speaking incoherently of the great god lol. |
Akuma-Heika 8/22/12 . chapter 2I have read all three chapters, but I wanted to make a few suggestions. First can Mana join? She has already lost a ton of money she might as well get something out of it. Hell I am hoping that by the end of this most if not all of 3A is in and a few others besides. (Anya, Nekane, Arika [make up for not being there for him lol], Chao [that would be funny lol], Theodora, Fate girls.) Only girl I would make a request against is Asuna but that is because I just can't envision the pair. I don't dislike her as a character but I have never shipped them even when I first picked it up 6 years ago. I would find it funny for Madoka to get stuck in the room maybe the cake with Misa and to top it off after everyone else is in Sakurako joining because she has won all bets. Can't forget Kazumi...maybe Sayo. As I said I would have nothing against any member of 3A besides Asuna but at the same time I like many of the students shipped with Negi. Negi becomes a Majin/Deus Nosferatu (Demon God/Undead God) his stamina would be legendary by this point. "..." Zazie greeted back, in pajamas and rubbing her sleepy eyes off. Then she peered into the room, looking in all directions for a few seemingly eternal moments before staring at Negi's eyes and simply whispering, "Sorry. Wrong room." PLEASE ADD HER! NegiZazie is definitely within my top ten maybe top three. Also what are the odds of lemons in this? Full ones. |
Gundam Kaiser 4/17/12 . chapter 3Oh wow, poor Negi-sensei. On the one hand, I pity that poor kid. On the other hand, part of me wishes /I/ got that much attention when /I/ turned 18... |
Ichiharu93 2/1/12 . chapter 3dude i just finished reading this and i love the ideas and the plot. and to me this story is fucking funny as hell and you are very good with this i look forward to reading the rest of the parts and i also wish you the best of luck as well |
Elmion 12/26/11 . chapter 3MEANWHILE IN CHISAME 1 to you good sir |
Elmion 12/26/11 . chapter 2"THANK YOU GOD!" and I had to review. Damn you for making me laugh so hard in the middle of broad daylight and having to explain it to my little brother. Definitely one of the best Negima humor fics in forever. Creative premise, wonderful characterization, and Sextum. You win. I imagine the girls in hiding are getting increasingly flustered (except for Eva who's probably smirking) |
Bren Tenkage 12/6/11 . chapter 3Yep Negi is going to die...poor lucky bastard with all these horny but crazy women |
Mephiles 11/25/11 . chapter 3Wow...nice writing. Very funny. I have only one criticism... Natsumi is kind of a bitch. I do hope you don't make her get back together with Kotaro after this because if her first reaction after feeling a gap between them is to try to cheat then she clearly doesn't care very much. Just my opinion but I think it would be best for Kotaro to then end up with Madoka or Chizuru...of course if you want them to be Negi-worshippers to then I suggest having Kotaro fall into deep depression since everyone he loves abandons him for his best friend. Personally I know I would enjoy reading a fic about Negi screwing the girls whilst Kotaro whimpers to himself but I'm into pain. I know it sounds harsh but I really am not meaning to be offensive, I am just speaking my mind. |
Savaris 11/20/11 . chapter 3Wow. He should be having aneurisms right now! ...Somehow, I kind of feel something similar could/should happen in a rare three copies only ever produced OVA specials, with interchangeable T and M rating versions solid gold something pack. Hopefully Akamatsu's going to give the okay for their production and release, yeah. |
Savaris 11/20/11 . chapter 2Man, this is one birthday night he won't be forgettign in his immortal life... He is immortal in this continuity right..? A scene of carnage... |
rqgenevieve 11/13/11 . chapter 3A very good storyline, but may request that Negi end up beibg with Asuna, if he ends up with anyone, that is. Thank you for your consideration and hard work. , rqgenevieve |