this was a very beautiful and great story :) keep on with writing! XD 333

Awesome story! My favorite chapter was #7. Great twist by the way:)

Nice story. Short and sweet.

that was so amazingly cute!

i love the way you made Wolf sound like...wolf and made everyone else the way they are in teh book. and yeah it really is a good story line

This is really great!

Just make sure to capitalize your words where it's needed, and use proper punctuation.

But your story is really original and interesting.

Keep up the great work.