awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! it's all i can say. i love it!

"OMFG SPARKLES! And lookie, they're on this little silver band thingy! That's so cute. But it's takes away from the sparkly sparkles," would have been my reaction if that was me.

Aaaaawwwww...

awwwwh! such adorable moments!

Wow. The duplicity... it makes my head spin. Poor Hannah.

I don't think I could trust him either. Ziva had been proving for a long time that she was better than the assassin her father strove to create before her daughter and son came into her life. Protecting her children has to come first and everyone in the Gibbs family will stand by her and has stood by her side.

ooooooo! he wants hannah. but will rimon go away? i hope so, just to leave this family in peace. good chapter update. just...poor ziva! how much more can she handle of this?

Uh oh! An interesting chapter, you keep coming up with something different. I never know what's going to happen next. Great work! I love that we're seeing hints of ninja-ziva, like when she knew he was in the cupboard, I've missed that :) another good one, x

Wow nxt chapter pls.:))

Oh my god!

what's the threat? is hannah's father really following her? please update soon. suspense!

Ooh an intruguing and tense chapter topped off with a little cuteness at the end there, very nice ;) keep it up! x

Great OC's, love the character development on the existing characters, too. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Ohhhh so u make chapter by chapter at atime

What about the part that Tony proposes?)