For your first one it was marvelous...

I liked of how the story ends. A lot. That sounds good. VEEEEERY gooood... you're nice! Lovely 3

Hey, I really liked this fanfiction. For a first timer I'm impressed.

Wow, this was a beautiful and fantastic story. I really liked your writing style, and the way you protrayed Jareth and Sarah's personalities was spot on.

I'm definitely adding this to my favorites. )

This is a lovely, lovely story. So well written. A kind of gentle story, even with the challenge, its not over the top or too evil or anything. I really liked it.

I LOVE IT! :)

That was different. I liked it. I was however awaiting more explanation on their new 'bond' with each other. Not that there Had to be more there... just that I was kind of expecting it and mildly surprised when more information was not forthcoming.

All and all a good little piece. I absolutely love the scene in the rain.

Thanks for writing.

Really enjoyable. I hope you write more in the future.

xx

Awww Karen was being so nice, but what WILL Jareth and Sarah do about IT?

The moon's cycle must work differently in their world than it does in ours. XD

It's certainly interesting, I'm curious enough to want to see how it ends. I'm not sure exactly what my opinion is, it must be too late at night for me to really think properly.

I really enjoy reading your story but I am a little confused about the last two lines. Is Sarah alright with being bound to Jareth or is it an after effect of the binding that has Sarah caring more for Jareth?

Happy to see this story back again, look forward to more because I love what you have so far.

I am really liking where the story is going. You are very good :) keep up the good work

Love a caring Jareth

Wow- I can't wait to see what happens next