Overall, you had a good concept, and I think the portrayal of his feelings were excellent. However, the gramatical errors took away a decent bit of the power you wanted the readers to feel while reading this story. I struggled a little to understand what you were trying to say at some points. When you improve you improve your english some, perhaps you can come back and fix the errors for future readers. I can't wait for the next chapter to see how you do CC's feelings. Keep up the good work!

-Fangirl12

oh plss update chapter 2

Wow..hebat... Sebagai salah satu CG fan, saya sangat menghargai fic LLXCC!

Wow, that was just... amazing for someone whose first language isn't English! It was moving, and your grammar is lacking in some places, but the entire story as a whole still conveyed the feelings you wanted it to very strongly. Honestly, I don't think I've read such a good c. fanfiction with that many grammatical errors, and I mean that as a sincere compliment. Wonderful job, and I am sure your writing will only grow as you get back into the groove of the English language c:

Pretty good except for some grammatical errors. For example, "She was the worse lover possible be." (She was the worse possible lover one can be)

OMG this was so sweet and beautiful, I just loved how you described lelouch's feelings, are really touching, please update soon! this fanfiction has potential

There are parts where I struggle to understand the sentences or words. But apart from that, I really liked how it touched the readers' hearts

I can't wait to see the next chapter. Keep up the good work!

" The bond was just too STRONG. "

* C.C. x Lelouch *

wow. love this. :)) thumbsup & more :D

I loved it!It's soo touching!For sure I am waiting for the next chapter :D

mejor harem

omg I love this T_T I can't wait til you update