I think you should continue this. It's really cute and sad at the same time...

I really like the way you wrote Alf's feelings. Sad, but sweet. I'm looking forward to another chapter!

I definitely agree with your note, there needs to be more fan fiction for this game.

Awesome! I've been waiting to find an Arc Rise Fantasia fic that will be on-going, even if it's just unrelated oneshots! This fanbase DEFINITELY needs some more love.

Even though the piece was sad, it really captured all of the characters well, especially Alf. Though I usually lean toward longer oneshots, I found the length great for what you were trying to get across. All around, an awesome job!

I really hope to read another soon, thank you!