You wrote an interesting story here, but I'm puzzled by the ending. Why spend an entire story telling about the creation of the potion, and then not use it? What happened to it?

hey! i really liked your story! i just couldn't stop reading it! ah but the ending made me cry once again... i do love snape... darn that stupid snake! but like they've wasted so much time making the potion for nothing... :( :( :(

I wish I can like the story but I do not understand the logic of spending one whole year to come up with a potion to counter Nagini's poison only to be killed by it eventually. :(

OMG! Sev died! It was ttly unexpected but great job! The ending surprised me(in a good way) and I thought it was very fitting. I'm so glad she was still his friend. Loved the warm breeze part ;) Awesome Story! 33333333333

"And as they walk out Snape slowly reaches in his pocket and pulls out a Bezoar, swallows it, then aparates away, finally getting the peace he longed for. All is well." You don't know. It could have happened. That's my ending anyway. Thanks so much for this story. I loved every minute of reading it. :)

awwwh! this was such an amazing story! i loved it all! :)

Love to see Hermione is still defending Snape! Love this story and will hate to see it end. Update soon! :)

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Hey,

nice chapter! I really do hope that you're planning a happy ending... It's kind of sad seeing Snape alone in his gloomy house crumpling Hermione's letter.

I hope he's going to be better in the next chapter!

Keep it up!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Really good chapter!

Im glad that you didn't drag out the fight scene, while I enjoyed it in JKR's version I think its way too long for FF purposes. I plan to do the same for my story. Can't wait to see when they will next meet!

Keep up the good work!

Merch Blodau

WOW!

i love your writing,it is amazing,please upload soon

Wow!

This was amazing

I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter

pls do upload soon

really liked this chapter!

Sorry its been so long since I reviewed been away for quite awhile!

Cant wait to see how Hermione reacts!

update soon please!

ahhhh... this is NOT a good place to end your chapter ;-)

I hope you're going to update soon...

I think Hermione was very grown-up in this chapter. Not wanting to know... It was a bit not like her, but it was all right nevertheless. I hope everything'll turn out all right... but as Snape has now the potion that saves him :-)

Keep it up!

hey,

nice chapter! I don't mind the long wait as long as there IS another update ;-)

I hope Hermione is going to celebrate with Snape for finishing the potion... and they will reconcile. Just keep it up :-)