Okay, I just finished reading this and... da fuq hapanned in the end? After ten chapters they just... parted ways! Meh. This is a very good fanfiction with a very bad ending. Seriously. It's unfair.

Please write a sequel cuz Im not a big fan of the ending. The story was great though lol.

OMFG! I cried...I actually thought it would be a happy ending...please please please please please write a sequel!

Beautiful, waiting for part two and the movie.I think it was better than the movie and the fight scene was hat off to again beautiful. Thank you for the reading. Swift, Deadly, Silent.

That was absolutely amazing! Yet, you managed to kill it by not keeping them together at the end! How could you?*BEWILDERD FACE*

Anyway, since they didn't end up together, could you please write a sequel, pretty please?*ANGEL FACE*

Disappointed reader,

Shulami

P.S- make sure the end up together this time!

I am so gonna killllllll u for the last chapter! I was reading it in my physics class hidden behind the kinematics textbook... and at the end of the chapter i scream out noooooooooooo! And thanks to u sweet heart i am in detention now...humpph...

Wonderful wonderful wonderful wonderful... toooooo goood tooooooo great... keep it going... i LUVVVVVVVVED it... tooooooo goooooooood... And dont worry about the detention... that happens to me a lot... :D!

P.S i loved the "my darling" touch... magnifico...

I loved this story! if it hasnt been continued im going to flip! Great job!

Wow. I love this story so much. What you did with the characters, concepts and other things was very well done. You know how to write emotions and inner conflicts very well. Your action scenes are very well done too. You did amazing things with what could have being better from them movie. You worked so well with all the information given in the movie and implented, complemented everything so well too.

I loved the relationship between Raizo and Mika. Very well written the development and all the drama.

I watched the movie for the first time few days ago on TV, yeah I know, I didn't want to watch it before thinking it was awful but I end up loving it despite the plot being very poor. The concepts and characters are awesome, it's a pity they weren't done better.

The end of your story is so full of angst and anger. I'm feeling like a sequel would be nice despite the fact Mika couldn't stand to be in the same place as Raizo again for some time. I've no idea if crossed your mind a sequel or another story.

Very sad there are very few FF stories of Ninja Assassin.

Thanks for the great and keep it up.

sequel please!

Oh that's so sad! I LOVED this story especially after watching the movie three times in a row minutes before searching for stories about Raizo and Mika. They make such a cute couple that balances each other out and I get that Raizo made the right decision by going seperate ways but I would've liked them to stay together and finally give in to their physical desires to produce a mini Raizo-Mika girl or boy. Really hope you'll make a sequel because the story was really awesome!;)

OMFreakingG! AHHHH! So the whole time I'm reading the last chapter I'm like,'Whatever. She's totally not dead. No one kills the main character off. Not the sexy awesome female lead.' And then she wakes up and I start cheering and tearing. Running around fist pumping and stuff. And then the last bit hits me in the face like a ton of freaking bricks and I pass out for a while, wake up, read it again and begin screaming like a banshee. Needless to say, the people in Starbucks hate me right not, but, though it's a bittersweet ending and I sure hope the sequel comes SOON and kicks this ending right in the teeth, I did like how you left things hanging. Thumps up to you and your freaking radical story.

I almost threw my nook across the room when i actually thought she was dead.i was fully ready ro smash it to bits and take my tired ass too sleep but i stuck it now im still pissed knows good and goddamn well that whole last paragraph was a bunch of hes gonna show up on her doorstep one rainy night, cut and bloodied up and shes gonna love the story though.i sinceerly hope there is a sequal to this story.

I know right?all those damn philosiphes and abussive childhood i just eanna yell shut the hell up and just look sexy ya dumb thats what i would say if i knew a i do not, and it really depresses me.

Your making me want to watch the movie again and i would if my fat ass brother hadn't of broke it by sittin his ginormus continet of a butt on it!the part where he says 'mika, mika,mika' keeps on playing in my head and all i wanna do is... his arent entirely legal.

Love how you make the clans similar with the whole trade mark 'im going to kill you now' warning throug an inatimate object.i usually prefer OC's but when it comes to ninja assasin mika and raizo just fit together to perfectly.