| Reviews for Air |
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thekiller00 7/1/11 . chapter 22I really like this chapter. Ben makes a good father figure for Kyle, having gone through pretty much the same stuff with his father. I'm excited to see how Ben and Chickie raise Fiona and Kyle while working in the sequel. |
thekiller00 5/24/11 . chapter 21Great chapter. as for them getting engaged, I vote for yes. I like the name, by the way. I'm wondering though, is there a chance that this might have a sequel later on ? |
jerseybelle 5/24/11 . chapter 20I like Chickie and Ben, but no engagement, at least not now. |
thekiller00 5/24/11 . chapter 20Great chapter. They fit so well together. |
johnson1838 5/15/11 . chapter 19 love it! |
thekiller00 5/14/11 . chapter 19Great chapter. I liked the way that the talk between Ben and his father turned out. |
thekiller00 5/10/11 . chapter 18Great chapter. Ben is already filling the father role pretty well. |
Emily 5/3/11 . chapter 17 To LilahMorgann, You deleted my idea for a story. It was the Southland Season 3 Finale Smutty One-Shot. Why did you take it off? Was it too racy? Do you not want to write it? Do you know of anyother Southland Fanfics writers would be interested in this one? Please do help me out and send a reply soon. |
jerseybelle 5/2/11 . chapter 17Ohhh, new drama. Good chapter. |
thekiller00 5/1/11 . chapter 17Whoa ! I really like how you have Ben, Chickie and Kyle progressing as a family. I am curious to see what kind of drama Henry brings. |
thekiller00 4/23/11 . chapter 16Great chapter and Happy Easter ! |
Emily 4/20/11 . chapter 15 My story idea is gone! How come you took it off? If it was too inapropriate. Then, I'm sorry. I just didn't really know anybody else to ask to do it. I'm sorry. |
jerseybelle 4/19/11 . chapter 15Ah, yes, I remember those hormones well. Poor Chickie. |
thekiller00 4/19/11 . chapter 15Mood swings ahead, lol. Great chapter though. |
LilahMorgann 4/6/11 . chapter 14thank you for the kind reviews. I love writing it. And if you ever have constructive criticisms that would be fine with me :) |