I loved it, wish there was more to read.

If SM's books had been anything like this I may have enjoyed them a whole lot more.

Exellent! Weird! And, most importantly, completely and utterly awesome! (That's right, I said it!)

Ahh, of course Edward hired Bella to be the au pair for Bree as she was an orphan and if anything happened to her no one would notice, care or be the wiser. He was safe in hiring her. Until their attraction compounded matters. But I still worry about poor Bree being alone, raised by a parade of nannies...unless Bella and/or Esme can come to tolerate the scent of human blood.

Great story!

I knew there was a reason I never did any babysitting while growing up - if I had like it, I might have become an au pair... And then a vamp! :P

très original...

i realy love this story but i think you should keep going make it longer. i what to no what comes next?

Whew...I agree with BB...at least an epilogue would be more than welcome!

The pace of this was like a roller coaster!

Thanks for sharing!

Kathie

A one shot? So much happened, accelerated pacing, I'm guessing, yes! Thrilling ride, so to speak! :)

oh i love it so much i am a big fan of Charlotte Bronte and Stephenie Meyer good job hope you make it in it a story :)

wow...bronte indeed! that was a crazy interesting ride...very gothic, which is what you were obivously going for...but i almost wanted him to keep her...now who is going to care for bree?

I loved your dark Edward. Very sensual and dominating. Great writing!

This was marvelous...

Yow!

Rock on, Candy!

Yep, you are so giving reader what they want, a dark, hostile Edward, mysterious, scary, dangerous and HOT!

Bella has dealt with a great loss; fuck-hawt sex with her ‘employer’ was an unexpected and erotic turn of events for her…

It was lemony deliciousness. I liked how I assumed he was human; I wanted him to be…

You know everyone is going to expect this to be the start of a new vamp fic…lol, you will get so many email requests to continue.

I’m happy you just went there and wrote it. Tying her up, Edward is a dominating and a cold-hearted prick! Whoa, he is the exact opposite of gorgeous virginal, lovely, divine, Belladonna Edward (I miss him by the way)…

As always, love reading your words : )