Terry's warmth is so well described, that I almost can feel it. I keep wondering how hard must have been for him, denying all his feelings for Melaine and trying to live like never happend. But their love is bigger than that, he couldn't hold himself away from her.

Now, if you excuse me, I'm gonna read the sequel! *-*

Right now I'm freaking speechless as to what to say! My mind is still on a high at the amazing lyrical depiction it just absorbed, that it has yet been able to translate those emotions into words to tell you how much I not only enjoyed, and I mean THOROUGHLY enjoyed, reading this piece, but how much I can't get enough of your writing! You really outdid "At Midnight" with this sequel, and I'm most elated that you listened to the request and wrote it. How dare you deny us this ingenious work? :D

Pardon all the "I love" that you are about to get swamped with, because truly there is nothing about this that I didn't love! I love in the beginning how you stripped down Melanie's need and want to feel what she once had with Terry as she recounts her desire to be close to Batman now, to somewhat satiate that void I suppose, much the same way you had Terry bare his internal desire to show her how much he really felt about her in the prequel. I really did love how "Batman" began to unveil bits of his true nature to her as she inquired if Terry ever really did care - really loved her - the way she felt for him, and the eventual reveal of his identity was just beautiful. The moment when their lips touched, allowing their breaths to mingle as they focused on finally being able to be this close, and to feel what their hearts secretly desired, was as electric as it was poetic and beautiful. And the kiss...boy did I love that kiss! Never has such an outpouring being so powerfully written; it was the perfect romantic ending to this tale!

Let me also give credit to the bada**-ery that was that fight scene! I swear I just jizz every time I think about that sexy man in his tight suit kicking royal butt, especially for his woman! Loved it, loved it, loved it!

Need I say more? I probably could, but my mind hasn't fully descended from the high, so I'll leave you with those words for now and indulge in the Vytina goodness that is "All I Ask". Keep creating these awesome fics girl, you totally deserve more credit than what this site is giving you!

Sincerely,

P.O.J.A _

Wow...This was an incredible story from beginning to end. I have actually just recently watched an episode that involved Terry and Melanie, and it made me so sad that the relationship had had to end like that. This story more than compensates for what happened on the TV show. XD I cannot say enough how just simply beautiful this story was, and nothing is greater inspiration than Celine Dion music for this genre. XD

What don't I love about this piece? Nothing. It is fantastic. Again, the raw emotion appeals to me so much. We see them stripped down to little more than their raw emotions, their raw needs for each other. Batman, her security and her protection, her saviour and her love all in one - you draw that parallel in your revelation of her memories of him and how he reveals himself to her. She's a lucky girl to rope in Terry HottyMcHottness McGinnis. The love between them is something on a deeper, higher and purer level that anything he and Dana ever seemed to be able to proliferate and you show that so very clearly in this. Great job. The hard work put into it is recognised and appreciated.

Seven years old when Batman Beyond premiered. Seven to nine years old when I first saw the Melanie episode; seven to nine years old when I realized that I liked her more than Dana. Sheesh...the inner shipper of me must have taken root there.

All joking aside, I cannot press how beautifully written your writing is. Gah! You capture everyone so well, and the Melanie/Terry shipping deserves so much more. You're one of those brilliant writers, and I love it!

I love it so. :D

this is so amazing! it's so sweet and heart wrenching at the same time!

omg so good and then there were parts that got my heart pumping terrified that he would not want her but thank goodness he stays with her and for that i thank you. It was very intense but i just love melanie and terry together. Please write more stories with them in it and that they end up together. I think that melanie has a really sad and complicated life that terry and melanie can compliment each other because terry has a complicated life too. They can be each others light.

whoo! that was intense.. love it!

I didn't thave time to finish reading, but i've read enough to realize you have a natural talent for writing. Job well done, and i'll stop by another time to read some more :)

And yet in spite of the happiness of the lovely couple . . . somewhere in a dark cave, sitting in front of a large computer, is an old man that is probably freaking pissed.

The only thought that came to mind at the very end was: "It's so beautiful!" And indeed it is. I cannot thank you enough, Vytina, for doing this pair justice and creating yet another amazing story.

I was ever so pleased to read your work, a batman beyond story with both a plot and character development, it was wonderful so wonderful that I had to read the rest of your work. I always wished the the batman beyond fandom would have taken off far more than it has it is nice to see a writer of quality still writing.

Lovely.