Elphias Doge was alive in Book 7...

Nicely Written.. though i just hopeyou update the next one faster! :)

Just telling you I nearly cried at all the emotions in the previous chapter, not only because of the original lines but definitely because of yours too.

And I wanted to ask you what Hermione thought the centaurs did to Umbridge. I tried looking for it but didn't find it. Could you tell me please?

Not to be nit-picky and since this is complete it is probably useless but IF Harry was a direct descendants Dorea and Charlus Potter (there is no certain proof one way or the other but I prefer it that way) then they would be Harry's grandparents not great-grandparents

I have to say that this is the best and most in-character "reading the books" story that I've read, and Idk if you have any idea how much I appreciate it. Thank you so much for trying to stick to the books and not doing the same old shit that other people do. I also admire the fact that you are fair to the characters you dislike, keeping them realistic without bashing them just because you dislike them. Thank you. You don't have Sirius being annoying and childish the way that a lot of people do (him being my favorite character, this is especially appreciated), you don't have Molly nitpicking at every single little thing her kids do and criticising everything, you have Dumbles getting the criticism he deserves without bashing him throughout the story. Point being, these "reading the books" stories don't work if the characters are OOC, and I am sooo happy with how well you have done. I am going to move on to HBP and then DH with excitement. Thank you so much!

wwooow i think its really weird when people have o read about your life, or what it will be like anyway

loved it!

"By Toutatis!" exclaimed Arthur as everyone looked confusedly at him.

To be honest, I don't even know if you're still regularly on FF, but this was too good a reference to read without commenting on. I just wanted to say that I am so madly in love with you for reading Asterix comics and that your girlfriend is a lucky girl ;)

A well done chapter that was boring in the book.

I agree with you about Hagrid and the fact the spiders he allowed to breed killed and hurt so many shows the man has terrible judgement.

Given how bad the justice system is in the Magical world I thought for sure Harry would be sent to Azkaban after he killed Riddle.

Ron really is stupid.

A good line about Kettleburn.

A good chapter.

It’s good Ron knows his place its not like he does anything to ever be anything but a third wheel.

Hermione I think went to the House of the brave so she could show off there its easy to stand out for your intelligence when you are in a house of fools.

The Weasley family really are bullies.

Very polite saying Hermione is tactless when really is very nasty to Luna. Maybe Ron and Hermione are a good match for their rudeness.

It was terrible Fleur got hurt.

A good chapter.

Hermione should never have talked Harry into teaching everyone who wanted to learn or pass their exams.

A good complement from Severus or the best Harry will ever get.

Someone might have put ink in Fleur’s hair that would be a tragedy she had the most beautiful hair.

That was bloody amazing!

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I found this story a few days ago and I have to say it has truly been a pleasure reading it.

A really good chapter with many nice details.

I always thought it nasty and did nothing for House unity the last minute points in First Year.

I liked what Neville did to Draco who might be a coward and a poor Death Eater but he is still very nasty and has great potential to be a monster.

Molly able to duel is good to know as I hated how Bellatrix died Moody should have been the one to kill her not some overbearing cow.

I liked Perkins Bill is funny without being mean unlike the Twins.

Capetian Alley was a nice idea.

I have wished someone would tell Ron and Hermione "All right you two, zip it," for a long time, Molly was a surprise.

Harry not interested in Ginny is a good thing.