This is really good

Wow, that was so very beautiful!
It's so innocent and so pure!

Absolutely beautiful.

*claps* bravo bravo :P

I cried...and I loved it...

its so vary true how if you loved someone and thay one day just dissaperd how would you fell would you remember the good times or just feel regret. i love how you put so much detail in to your story, also how made it as if you were right there i could honesty say that this is one of the better storys that i have read and i hope you have more to come GREAT JOB

nice lemon

No words.

Just _

Good story!

I liked it !

Maybe, next time add a bit more angst or Humour romance... Leading up tO a sequel!

Well done!

I really liked this... it was well-written, and kept my attention. it was a little fast-paced, but it's not a huge problem.

anways, I have something to ask you. that last line, "It was just one moment in a long span of time. He was Allen and I was Lenalee and that was all that mattered," can I borrow that for a story of mine? I'll give you credit for it, I just wanted to make sure it was okay with you that I use if before I go ahead and take it.

Brilliant, no ooc i could detect, and i feel your pain with the "there isnt enough time" deal, Keep Writing!

Wahh. So cute. I liked it xDDDD

Ha my first lenallee x allen lemon.

Its actually really good. You wrote it very well. Its strange at first

Reading these two together because

I'm so used to yullen. But I like this two for some reason. It seems in character. :D yay good job!

Oh, that was wonderful. It really made my day. And you have a great style of write I must say. Keep up the good work! (And the lemons of course...XD)

Amazing. Loved every bit of it!