 Butterfree 12/17/11 . chapter 3Another great chapter! I love how they're not actually physically long yet it still feels like so much happens in one chapter. You're doing well in developing all the characters too. And I'm impressed in how well you're keeping up with Sam's sarcastic POV...I still love it! XD
Thanks for the read and good luck! CupidKirby |
 JanthanSeddie Fanatic 12/11/11 . chapter 3I hope you update soon! :) I can't wait for SEDDIE to happen! :)) |
 HaileyMarieWeary 12/2/11 . chapter 2im gonna die without the next chapter! |
 Pro-Rose 8/3/11 . chapter 2Haha this is pretty awesome :3 I wanna know the answers to these new mysteries too! I'm usually not too into 'alternate universe' icarly fics, but this one seems really good *nod nod*. Enough to keep me interested at the very least xD Can't wait for the next chapter |
 iammeandicanfly 6/20/11 . chapter 2Hey! I saw the trailer for this on YouTube & really, really loved it so I got the link and...now im here! This is a really great story. I love it. Update soon? :D |
 anon 6/15/11 . chapter 2 I really like this. I like AU stuff, but it's hard to find those stories. This is really good :) |
 ProfessorCatEars 5/28/11 . chapter 2keep going! plz? |
 Butterfree 5/14/11 . chapter 2Wow, now we're introducing some mystery into the mix. Not only the mystery of the cafe thing, but the changes in Freddie's behaviour too...I like it! Quite a few steps deeper than most stories are willing to go.
Haha, still loving Sam's lines in the story. Her sudden and almost instinct-like impulse to 'hate' Freddie is amusing and believable to watch. She's just as violent and exasperating as ever, which I honestly don't think she'll ever grow out of in a world of psychotic mothers who would plant chips in their sons' heads, tormented artists who would make sculptures of a Christmas tree decorated with noses, and doormen who would steal cookies from children.
Carly's considerate yet somewhat manipulative personality was also nicely done. Her habit of talking about boys and responsibility all the time is obviously present.
I'm mostly interested in how you're going to further reveal Freddie's character, honestly. He seems to be the most different in your story from what I've read. He just seems less spazzy and socially awkward, especially seeing as he now has three potential girls to end up with. And yes, I'm curious as to why the designers decided to change Freddie's hairstyle after season one. It's not like Nathan can't wear the old one, since I've seen him with the season one hair style in videos and stuff.
Anyway, thanks a lot for the hard-to-find AU read and good luck with any future writting!
TwisterKirby |
 Butterfree 5/14/11 . chapter 1Very VERY interesting plot you got going. It's not often we see well-written Seddie AU's around, and I'm looking forward to what this one will intice...
I'm glad you're going to have more characters in this story rather than just Sam and Freddie. Having mixes of Gibby, Spencer, Carly, and even Valerie make it all the more interesting and introduces a lot mroe potential.
And yes, Freddie is hot; and before that, he was freaking adorable (still is, in a way). I always feel more satisfied when characters in the show finally acknowledge Nathan's smoldering hotness instead of having his character be on the receiving end of the stick all the time.
TwisterKirby |
 BeautifulDreamer.x 5/14/11 . chapter 2great story :)
It really should have more reviews!
Can't wait to see where you take this..
And can't wait for an update!
Faved and Alerted xD
-Dreamer |
 flylikeblackjack 5/13/11 . chapter 1haha i love this story, i love the concept of it... well um great idea! and keep on writing |
 ThePenIsMighty 2/11/11 . chapter 1I'd love to see more. Update soon. |
 rachel 1/23/11 . chapter 1 SQUEEEEE i loooove this!
please update SOON |
 shannaROCKS 1/18/11 . chapter 1This is awesome! I really love the plot, I can feel myself getting sucked in already haha. Nice work, and I hope you update soon! :) |