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Reviews for: The Lovely Café
Butterfree 12/17/11 . chapter 3
Another great chapter! I love how they're not actually physically long yet it still feels like so much happens in one chapter. You're doing well in developing all the characters too. And I'm impressed in how well you're keeping up with Sam's sarcastic POV...I still love it! XD

Thanks for the read and good luck! CupidKirby
JanthanSeddie Fanatic 12/11/11 . chapter 3
I hope you update soon! :) I can't wait for SEDDIE to happen! :))
HaileyMarieWeary 12/2/11 . chapter 2
im gonna die without the next chapter!
Pro-Rose 8/3/11 . chapter 2
Haha this is pretty awesome :3 I wanna know the answers to these new mysteries too! I'm usually not too into 'alternate universe' icarly fics, but this one seems really good *nod nod*. Enough to keep me interested at the very least xD Can't wait for the next chapter
iammeandicanfly 6/20/11 . chapter 2
Hey! I saw the trailer for this on YouTube & really, really loved it so I got the link and...now im here! This is a really great story. I love it. Update soon? :D
anon 6/15/11 . chapter 2
I really like this. I like AU stuff, but it's hard to find those stories. This is really good :)
ProfessorCatEars 5/28/11 . chapter 2
keep going! plz?
Butterfree 5/14/11 . chapter 2
Wow, now we're introducing some mystery into the mix. Not only the mystery of the cafe thing, but the changes in Freddie's behaviour too...I like it! Quite a few steps deeper than most stories are willing to go.

Haha, still loving Sam's lines in the story. Her sudden and almost instinct-like impulse to 'hate' Freddie is amusing and believable to watch. She's just as violent and exasperating as ever, which I honestly don't think she'll ever grow out of in a world of psychotic mothers who would plant chips in their sons' heads, tormented artists who would make sculptures of a Christmas tree decorated with noses, and doormen who would steal cookies from children.

Carly's considerate yet somewhat manipulative personality was also nicely done. Her habit of talking about boys and responsibility all the time is obviously present.

I'm mostly interested in how you're going to further reveal Freddie's character, honestly. He seems to be the most different in your story from what I've read. He just seems less spazzy and socially awkward, especially seeing as he now has three potential girls to end up with. And yes, I'm curious as to why the designers decided to change Freddie's hairstyle after season one. It's not like Nathan can't wear the old one, since I've seen him with the season one hair style in videos and stuff.

Anyway, thanks a lot for the hard-to-find AU read and good luck with any future writting!

TwisterKirby
Butterfree 5/14/11 . chapter 1
Very VERY interesting plot you got going. It's not often we see well-written Seddie AU's around, and I'm looking forward to what this one will intice...

I'm glad you're going to have more characters in this story rather than just Sam and Freddie. Having mixes of Gibby, Spencer, Carly, and even Valerie make it all the more interesting and introduces a lot mroe potential.

And yes, Freddie is hot; and before that, he was freaking adorable (still is, in a way). I always feel more satisfied when characters in the show finally acknowledge Nathan's smoldering hotness instead of having his character be on the receiving end of the stick all the time.

TwisterKirby
BeautifulDreamer.x 5/14/11 . chapter 2
great story :)

It really should have more reviews!

Can't wait to see where you take this..

And can't wait for an update!

Faved and Alerted xD

-Dreamer
flylikeblackjack 5/13/11 . chapter 1
haha i love this story, i love the concept of it... well um great idea! and keep on writing
ThePenIsMighty 2/11/11 . chapter 1
I'd love to see more. Update soon.
rachel 1/23/11 . chapter 1
SQUEEEEE i loooove this!

please update SOON
shannaROCKS 1/18/11 . chapter 1
This is awesome! I really love the plot, I can feel myself getting sucked in already haha. Nice work, and I hope you update soon! :)
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