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tsuandes-santuary 5/10/11 . chapter 6
this was extreamly good.

i just started reading the chapters yesterday and printed them all out.

areyou goingot write more chapters? because what happens the helen and john? im so lost. this story was great!
melissaadams22 5/8/11 . chapter 6
Hey there,

*Sighs* Sorry my feedback is so short and a little slower lately, still fighting this sinus infection...SUCKS.

Anyways though GREAT job on this, I loved it. The only thing I look forward to in my misery. New fiction and at least my nose is draining. LOL

Terrific job, truly terrific so keep it up please.

Thanks
VGWrighte 5/8/11 . chapter 6
Loved it. Delightful peace. Captured characters quite well, and had a very realistic view of John and Helen's relationship.
melissaadams22 4/15/11 . chapter 5
Hi there,

*Happy, happy, happy dance* Not only is tonight the return of Sanctuary season 3.5 for which I'm over the moon for incase you didn't know and I know you did...*winks*

But you also updated the story, which I ADORE. *Throws roses and chocolates in honor of you around and I'll go find an Egyptian with a big, BIG fan*

Thanks,

Melissa
jmarrero16 4/2/11 . chapter 4
I love this story. I think having that time period come back.
SanctuaryAlexa 3/15/11 . chapter 4
Awesome story, love it its so passionate and entertaining keep it up! D
melissaadams22 2/16/11 . chapter 4
Hi there,

*Waves happily* I love new stories/updates in the morning and then here on the East Coast we finally got a bit warmer today, 50 degrees and almost sixty by Friday but then it's going down to 40 again...little hints of Spring in mid to late February just to tease us. LOL

This was fantastic, it was truly remarkable and I thank you so much for your talents. *Tosses arms around you and gives you a big old huggle hug*

Thank you
melissaadams22 2/3/11 . chapter 3
Hey there,

OOH interesting for sure. I enjoyed it so...*Digs out some chocolate chip cookies and milk* Here you go as a reward for such a FANTASTIC job! :D

Thank you,

Melissa
HAZMOT 2/3/11 . chapter 3
I'm pumped to see how Nikola started this war, and yet knowing some of what Helen went thru with the Cabal changing her into some monster that only John can control within her. I'm sure Henry, Will and Kate still are curious as to how this changes their future, with knowingly their deaths are inevitable in a short span of time. Helen is determined to alter the future and destroy the source blood. I hope to see more into what caused Nikola to betray his friends. :D
Adria626 2/2/11 . chapter 3
I really like this story. I usually go for Helen/Nikola, though the Nikola bashing in this story is needed and shall I say deserved? Though I do feel sorry for Tesla. (What? I have a soft spot for the man). I digress...You're story is amazing. Brilliant really. I do enjoy the way you write Helen and John, it almost makes me want to switch sides. I cannot wait for more. You are an awesome writer!
melissaadams22 1/23/11 . chapter 2
Hey there,

GREAT, TERRIFIC story, truly wonderful but I have to say WHAT a Sunday here in my little corner of the world. *Electronics trying to drive me crazy, our dryer blew up, snow plow packed snow in front of the paper box so we didn't get a paper and just on and on it goes*

Your story was truly wonderful, a welcome respite from this day I promise you. Thanks so much.

Blessings,

Melissa who is considering crawling back in bed and pulling the covers over her head.
VGWrighte 1/23/11 . chapter 2
I'm still excited to see what the hell is going on. Waiting anxiously for more!
HAZMOT 1/23/11 . chapter 2
I'm a huge fan of this and the altered future in which Nikola is responsible. I've always loved the way Druitt loved Helen regardless of his dark and violent past. This future couple is averting a way obviously sparked by Nikola and the Cabal. You can feel the anger in her actiions, her eyes, that John can easily soothe. At which point their arrival has intensified her hate for the vampire or former there of. I don't know what they could do to change the future, the their past with seeing their friends again is intriguing to see what really happened to Helen. :D
Steff 1/20/11 . chapter 1
Aers, wow. That is a wonderful introduction to the story. You got the characters perfect. Can't wait for more. I have to find out what had happened in the 70 years.
melissaadams22 1/18/11 . chapter 1
Hey there,

Well a little warmer today but it's not gonna last or so they say...*Groans*

Anyway it gave me a happy mood and a great feeling to read your story/update and I ADORED it. So true to the characters and I loved the pace of it as well. NICE job truly.
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