Hey, this is really really good! Please update soon! I want to know what happened to the Dursleys. I was thinking that maybe the man that Voldemort hurt was Uncle Vernon?...

cool i like it

Very good, but I want more! Does he get caught?

Please. I wanna know!

-Rae-

Interesting. Keep Writing!

carry on. This isd good.

I don't know exactly where you are going with this, but... this start definatly has potential.

Carry on.

interesting... sorry to say but there are grammatical errors. i don't know why but i could see that you use some of the storyline from book four. i could be right, i could be wrong. hmm... continue this story and your sherlock holmes story, ya? P i'll be waiting...

Here I am again!

The 2nd chapter is even better than the first in my opinion. The suspense is building up and Im just dying to find out if Dumbledore even is at Hogwarts.

Your style - especially your description of Harry - sounds very much like Rowling and gives me the feeling as if Im reading the fifth book. Anyway, I like that combination of your own style and Rowmlings.

At last I have to add that I want some of those glasses that completely correct ones vision !

Please continue, youve got an avid reader here!

Hi there!

This story can be described by two words : atmosphere and potential! Its great but youre being cruel because you hancent told us yet how it will continue. Its not fair to build up such suspense and let your poor readers longingly wait for more :)

Anyway, my comments about the first chapter :

interesting idea of using a muggle perspective; it adds to the atmosphere which is really really great. Ill do a separate review for the 2nd chapter.

I feel honoured that you took one of my suggestions! THANK YOU VERY MUCH! I like the second chapter. Please post the next soon. Your ideas are quite good.

Hello! I very much liked it, very much, very much. So is Ron *really* gone? Is Sirius *really* on a mission? Or is it one of Voldy's evil plots? See, I don't really like action/drama fics. I like fics as fluffy as the marshmallows I eat in my s'mores. Hee hee. But I really like this story so-keep going!

OMG this is great story! I would like you to finnish this!

I really like this story! Keep it up! Please, write more soon. (I know how hard it is, I've just started my first story myself, but still... try to write more!)

Hmm... First I want to say that I like your fic. About the name! Lets see maybe Harry Potter and

th community of Voldemort or Harry Potter and a year full danger. But that are just suggestins so if you don't like it ignore it and just read the first bit. Anyway I'm anxious about the next chapter so please write more Luck

* AQUALARIA*

(PS: That was aloong review *gg*)

this is a fantastic story! i like how you took my crappy idea lol and made it in to a JK worthy fic! :D

please continue, i really like this!

Woo! Ok, me again :D

ya i cant sign in cuz im planning on flaming this really horrible fic, but i dont want to get my butt kicked :X

ANYWAY! This is good story so far! Hah. You sound like me. When i first put my ten aurors fic up, i was like er...where am i going with this? lol

to tell the truth, im still not sure how im going to end it! ...whoopsie :D

but ok! you wanted suggestions lets see here...

1. im liking this plot line!

2. perhaps you should go in to something with the Dursleys "disappearing" (ahem!) and Harry having to be sent to the nearest wizarding household until the Weasley's get back because arthur was sent on a mission to somewhere for the ministry so Harry gets stuck at Dracos and you can take it from there!

3. WOW. Does that idea suck or what? lol

4. This is good, just make sure you shy away from using anything more from or in the pattern of the 4th book! this story has so much potential! you have to give it it's own identity!

and perhaps the most important thing of all to do with this story...

5. WRITE MORE!

heehee! alrighty, im done :D