dude you should totally do a sequel to this :D

Add more my good sir. That is all.

wouldn't mind reading about the time after chapter one ;-) come on you know you want to

love it! bring in more of this or I'll get Takashi to killify you and destroy everything you love in a firey hell you can only shut out by closing your eyes and experience an entirely different kind of hell where you get to watch your loved ones die in even more horrorfying ways...k, bye!

so who does cutlass get?

My Blaze is a girl...

XD

BlazexBlaze

uh...no comment?

Idea: Spike wals in on Blaze and Bella then gets involved. Or Akira walks in on them.

Shadow Theif 1996 was here... Twice... And he liked it very much both times ... :3

orgasm evolution. 'nuff said.

Hey...umm If any one has any issues with the story as in flow, me jumping around or anything let me, know i"m still newish , You pointing out flaws now will help me latter on..Also like I said you have any ideas for the story throw them here or pm me, there are no bad ideas cept Yaoi, or netorare...and rape...and yaoi netorare rape..

Lol needs to know when he's beat but then this would not have been great as it is yay for greatness ... -_-' and I hate when I do that and I am too lazy to edit it great work

Sweet. And Please Do The Fic About Their First Time. Please?

ALLOTTT of grammar mistakes, but it was enjoyable otherwise :)

I will be honest... I couldnt understand this fic. :( It was a little confusing with the way the sentences were. This isnt a flame, by the way. Just telling you the truth in a none rude flamey way.