this is really good u should keep up this story

I like this penname. xP It makes me laugh. xP ANd lol, some Kai/Tala action going on in the corner... lol

ha, beybladers gone wild! Hilarious!

Hahahaha!

I laughed so much reading this! It's good, I can't wait to read more! :)

I read. Went to your profile, read the "revolution Review" and came back to review XD haha was fun. YEY kai and Tala having sex... erm... touching each other :P it was nice, Secuel? poor mister D, guess he missed the drunken people trowing up besides the WC - coz i don't know why they always miss! -

STOP CHANGING YOUR NAME GODDAMMMMMMIT.

I got distracted. I haven't even read a line.

I'm gonna request a oneshit then.

Muahahaha.

Once I find what I want.

Wait. I found.

I'll tell you when you read this.

HAHAHAHAHA.

You know the idea for this one, it's so awesome it could be a multi chaptered fic.

'"So, Mr. D! Lead us to the alcohol!"'

You make Tyson sound awesome.

I love how Kai and Tala ALWAYS END UP HAVING SEX.

The tournament is OFF?

Wow.

Mister Dee got pissed.

Oh,maybe he should have a beer and chill?

:D

OMG! LOL! HAHAHAHA.

THIS. WAS. BRILLIANT!

I really like how you used Mr. D as the main character for this... this was a really clever idea for a fic. :D

And, oh my god, it was the tenth anniversary last week? I HAD NO IDEA! D:

I feel like I've betrayed Beyblade or something, now. ;_; Also, you have awesome friends if they talk about Beyblade on facebook O_o I'd die if my friends found out I like Beyblade, writing or... a lot of things, really. XD

Anyway, this was fantastic. _ Just had to add it to my favourites :P

Hahaha, WE LOVE BEING YOUNG!

I'm was quite surprised that Grandpa G wasn't in the midst of that party showing all them young 'uns how it's done!

But we all know that Mr. Dickinson was a wild child in his youth. I bet he stopped the party because it was making him have the dreaded falshbacks (And by that, I mean the flashbacks you have when you wake up the day after and realise what a tool you made out of yourself the night before)

Great story ;D

Firstly, welcome back :)

Love the idea, the insanity of the bladers being crazed hormonal young alcoholic party goers and I'm looking forward to see how this story develops. Knowing you, I'm sure there'll be heaps of insanity and laugh out loud moments.

Aquila