This is really, really good. I like it a lot. PLEASE CONTINUE!

This is a really good story. Please write more, I really want to find out what happend! You're doing a really good job. You're such a good writer.

There...IS more to come, isn't there? Because if you stopped there, I would be vastly disappointed.

It was a little awkward in the beginning-you do a lot of telling and not quite as much showing, especially when you're describing Christina and her situation. Once everything starts, however, it all falls into place wonderfully.

And...erm...what's a Mary Sue story?

Overall, though, I thought it was great! Keep writing it!

This is interesting. You haven't updated in a while, nut t would be nice if you would continue.

This is cool! update. please. thank you.

Write more! good story

Hurrah! By all means, DO continue!

Nice work, its quite original. How ever Hermione is muggle born and Harry has lived with muggles all of his life. Only Ron doesn't know how muggles live.

This has an interesting beginning. It's good to know that Christine has taken Harry and his friends' mysterious appearance in her home in stride.

This may be a bit tricky - remember, Harry and Hermione are not going to be surprised at the lack of magic in Christine's house, as they both come from non-magical backgrounds. It is much more likely that they will be concerned with how and why they got there. As far as the lack of magic goes, Ron may be a bit amusing.

I'm curious to see the eventual reason you have for our Gryffindor trio to randomly appear in a muggle household across the Atlantic.

Good luck!

-Miriam