Absolutely stunning.

This story really made my heart ache! Ugh! It was so beautiful, and aw man, I just want to give everyone a hug. I want to give Byakuya a hug, and Rukia a hug, and Ichigo a hug, and heck I'll give Hisana and Yoruichi a hug too. Man... now I'm all sappy...

A lovely, delicate story, that well defines the worry Byakuya is feeling about how Rukia is doing after being separated from Ichigo. You managed to tell a lot of story with very few words.

that was very well written and flowed beautifully! Great characterisation, but i didnt get why you added yourichi there...it seemed odd to me that she would be on the same calibre as hisana...so im not sure why you would even mention her at all. Other than that, good job!

Wonderful atmosphere and characterization.

Wow this was touching. I like this brother/sister relationship fics 'cause that's the way is meant to be. Very well written, nice job n_n

My heart just fell after reading this, in a good way of course.

The emotions expressed in this piece are great and so easy to connect with and make it very easy to sympathize with the characters.

I loved the descriptive words and techniques you used.

Bravo on an excellent job!

(Having login probs) Anyway, this little bit makes my heart ache. For the both of them, for Rukia, for every couple that bites the dust in Bleach... Oh well.