Excellent story so far and it's about Ed! Finally a story about my favorite character in the show. And best of all you didn't portray him as wimp or sad and unable to get a girl simply mooning over Sloan. I can see it has been a while since you updated. I hope real life lets you do so, because what is here is good.

This is going great! Please don't leave it there... hope you post another chapter soon.

Eeek! And you leave it THERE? With poor Ed's heart broken? *sniffles* MORE! I WANT MORE! lol... Please?

I love ed! More please!

Ahhhhhhh! Where’ the rest of this fic? Or at least the next chapter! You can’t just leave me hanging off of that cliff, can you? I think my rope is about to snap...

Ah...so the dominant's out of the bag! Hehehee...I gotta know what's going to happen? Poor Ed...thought he had a good thing going. You have his personality down! Great going Carol! More please! :)

Poor Ed! Poor, poor Ed! I love it. You do a good job with the characterization of Ed. More and soon please?

This is very good..I hope you're going to add more

chapters to this. I'm curious how she's going to perform this difficult mission.

Hmmm...the plot thickens! :) Bless Ed's little heart...more please! :)

Hmmm...the plot thickens! :) Bless Ed's little heart...more please! :)

Carol, this is great. I love the way poor Ed seems so oblivious to his total appeal! Don't torture him TOO much, O.K.? More, more please!

Wow! This is really good! There is more right? RIGHT? My poor Ed. Such an innocent. I have to know what happens next!

Oh, Carol...this is good. I guess I'll have to extend your title to Queen of Ed Torture. I can't imagine what you would do if you had both Ed and Darien in a story together.

Ohhh...*evil grin*...I can't wait to see how much danger Ed is in! :) Please continue! More more more! :)