Fantastico! Very nice...oh and what's with the 6 sixes..._

Very nice. You may not consider yourself a poet, but I think that was lovely.

Hi,

That was good. I really like it. I hope you do one from her pov after Christian.

Katie Black

This was pretty good.

'My heart is frozen and I am alone'

*sniffles* You are an amazing poet. You are very, very talented.

It's not fair.

OMG! This was absolutely, positively, the coolest fanfic that i've read all day! You captured her emotions really well. I really liked it(can ya tell?)

Whoo! Go Hannah go Hannah!

if you say yr not a poet, then yr a liar! this is fantastic!

Aw... Very thoughtful and well-written, exactly what I imagine Satine must be thinking. Well done!

Ahh, so beautiful yet bittersweet!

You do it every time, shining Star :)

Story 666666 too, so extra speshulness [forgive me, I notice these things]

Not a poet! Hmm, Hannah, methinks you are a liar there. It was lovely. . . I can just picture Satine sitting and saying that to herself in the mirror.

"A different fantasy in every man's eyes."

I love that line. It was incandiferous. :)

This was really good! The ending was amazing! You captured Satine's thoughts very well. Keep writin'! Twix

Wow...

It was grand.

It brought her emotions through so clearly. It was just wonderful.

Star...you do it every time