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Twinklefeather 4/17/12 . chapter 1
Really... this story is so... heart-wrenching. You can easily see why Flay did what she did, but also somehow understand how SHE felt. I'm not saying that she should have lived (no offense) since that would have complicated things so much with KiraXLacus. Anyway, great story, I loved it.

-Twinklefeather
Rick 5/6/11 . chapter 1
Interesting perspective on flay. I don't usually find myself wanting to listen to anything she has to say for to long so good job keeping my attention. Only saw one grammatical error. Oddly more depressing than kira's suicide attempt. Overall good job, keep up the good work.
Meyrin-x-ZAFTgirl 3/31/11 . chapter 1
I. Am. Speechless. Flay's thoughts are expressed so AWESOMELY in this fic. I find it difficult to feel sorry for her, normally, but miraculously, this piece makes her relatable and realistic, and your excellent writing only serves to make it all the more memorable. Keep writing, okay? :)
Dark Phoenix Goddess 1/20/11 . chapter 1
Here's the thing with Flay: either you hate her for her bitchiness or you love her for her character development.

Honestly, I felt that Flay is the best character ever created in the Gundam series. Here's the thing: most of the female characters are portrayed as nice and forgiving, even toward those who tried to kill them or their loved ones. It is so unrealistic. But Flay is different. She's not perfect, but who is? You may not like the way she treated Kira at first, but wouldn't you feel any different had it been your father who died before your eyes? I doubt it.
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