I liked your story. The main idea is original and works well, Alec is quite on character (Mia isn't, under my point of view, but I raether prefer her in your story than in the show), and you developed it well.

Thanks for sharing it :)

I stumbled over this story and found it completely mesmerising. The pscychological aspects of love/obsession/need that drove Mia to basically 'live' in Alec's mind were a bit frightning, but completely believable. You are a very good writer to be able to convey all this in one chapter.

That was seriously harsh and sick, and well-written. It describes the feel of Manticore. It paints a brilliant picture of what psy-ops must have been like and what those transgenics must be like. Good work ;)

It's awesome! It's sad! Great story! It's really really well written!

I have issues with Mia and this fic played them well. My poor baby Alec. You just have to feel so sorry for him. I'd love to know on what his life was like after the others escaped. Great little fic!

dark, almost vampiric Mia. Beautiful.

Great one shot! i love it!

Hi! I liked this one! not what I usually think, but its a good change! I liked how you explained it all, what she's doing to him, really good! poot Alec though... but loved your writing!

keep up the good work!

Great googily moogily! That was really something. I'm going to add it to my favorites list. Ethereal and creepy. Well done. Great line: "a shade off of completely sane, a step away from completely human."

Great googily moogily! That was really something. I'm going to add it to my favorites list. Ethereal and creepy. Well done. Great line: "a shade off of completely sane, a step away from completely human."

um wow that is so wow ,(

"She keeps for herself those little pieces of him that she caught beneath her nails..." Great line and great imagery overall. Liked this very much.

Interesting having the psy-ops on Alec being done by Mia. And you have a lyrical style that makes this seem almost dreamlike. Good job.

Another wonderful fic as usual. Again, I loved the imagery of Mia sifting through Alec's mind... "swirls beneath grey-blue monotony of duty, discipline, mission, Manticore." Beautiful fic. It's good to see you back and writing again.

cool take on the psy-ops experience, that's a lot like what i imagine they would do to him. the doctors and transgenics there obviously played with alec's memories and your idea of mia taking the ones of the outside for herself is interesting. i hope that they give us some more info abt psy-ops and whet they did to him sometime on the show.