I cant belive its over this trilogy was amazeing went throught all three in one day you realy need to make more like this :)

no the story cant be done i spent all day reading the story plz make another one

I loved ur stories plz make some more!

This was absolutely amazing. I pretty much just tore through the entire trilogy! At first I was skeptical (minus the Piccolo/ChiChi stuff, because I love that couple), but I wasn't sure how to take the whole Goku being said stuff (because who likes a sad Goku?). But you pulled everything off AMAZINGLY! I loved every bit I read. You are pretty much my hero now.

Anyway, this story in particular was super cute. :) I love Goten, that kid is adorable. You did a really great job!

I've never read all three parts, but I did today, and they are realli great.

Both eh?

Lmao.

Great work.

Your Friend, PC

I don't know if you intentionally did it, but alot of P's character rubbed of on Goten, it seems. Good work.

That was nice, but I still miss Bra... and feel kind of cheated with Goku and Bulma's part. There wasn't a lot of romance there. :(

Where's Bra? :( She's my favorite character next to Bulma, who is first. I miss Bra. Without Vegeta, couldn't Goku be her father? Goku deserves someone else to call him dad. Goten and Trunks aren't. I don't see why they couldn't call him dad out of respect, since technically Goten's his biological son and Trunks is now his stepson. Goten and Trunks aren't THAT ill-mannered to outright not show him even an ounce of respect.

You are an awsome writter I love chichi and piccolo and all the sequels that came after. Your stories are among my favorite stories based on this pairing. I don't know how you came up such good ideas and character interaction. Its funny and serious together which I like to see. good job.

:) :) :)

I just loved it, the entire series.

very well done.

aw i loved all three stories! u shouldnt of stopped u know make it a saga like ...Nicky and...er just make up some girl...well its ur call...they were all great stories! ima read them again!

Fantastic story! But I can't help but wonder what happened to Trunks. And let's not forget Bulma and Goku. How did they take the news?

Oh, well!

Thanks for writing. And, by all means...DO IT AGAIN!

WOW! I love your writing. The way you did the trilogy was wonderful...loved how it all came together in the end. and the image of Picclo drunk..that will always be something to laugh at! Well off to go and read the rest of your work! Thunk and Trigun inculded..I have to read the rest of the InuYasha trilogy! Hehe..well once again wonderful work!

God damn I love this fic...It was marvelous..I can't stop re-reading all of your fics, they're so twisted and great!

Oh, wow! This was really great - I love how all the families split, to only rebuild into completely different, yet honestly happy people. I would have never thought of such a thing. Genius, pure genius! You're an awesome writer. Definately continue, if only for a hobby.