I want to read the full story!

Love it, was browsing seeing if anyone wrote a pairing of my favorite female lead from Alpha Protocol, and found this. Loved that game, and seriously - I loved reading this. It fit the characters both rather well, I like the quirky Mike, best way to play him I think. And I actually managed to not think of Mike's horrid voice actor while reading this (ha ha). So, thanks again for this and keep up the good writing!

Thank you for this story it really finished the story for me I loved sis in the game and was sad that you couldn't do anything for her in the game but this is an amazing story thanks

This story is an old favorite of mine.
Loved the Game
Love the pairing, very few good Sis stories

that was pretty awesome :).

A very nice story. Shame we'd never get to see the continuing adventures of Mike Thorton and Sis, but oh well.

I guess there isn't enough material to go on with there. Shame there wasn't an alpha protocol 2, but that was because the game didn't sell.

Cute story. I liked albatross so it's sad to see him turned into a nutty old man, but since it's for Sis' sake, I can't complain. Also, poor Mike, sounds like a painful experience, haha.

Great story, man. I love the way you portrayed Sis. Though (granted it wouldn't have helped the story much if you did this) I don't think Sis would even sign very much...just my opinion, though.

Also, I agree with Anime...um...I only memorized the first bit of their name, but that person...or robot. Where was Mina? Did she die? Cuz honestly I can't see her abandoning Thorton even after it's all over.

haha that was a great story you really portrayed Mike great and Sis too I think really great read and great comedy value

Aha loved your portrayal of Thornton in your works. The best parts of that game came from hammering the square button at any given chance. Bravo!

Great work. I was thoroughly impressed with your PDF.

Loved this fic :D I always did feel like helping Sis while I was playing the game. Great fic

I just finished rereading this fanfic. I must say, it was still as enjoyable as the first time! Great job. You really ought to write more AP fanfics. You're good at it! I'd especially love to see more about the Adventures of Mike and Sis!

Though I do have a question about all this. Where's Mina in all of this? Did she and Mike part ways, or did she die, or...? Aside from that question, though, this was a really good fanfic.

Keep up the great and brilliant work!

Awesome.

Wow, I am a huge fan of this game and the story. You have done a remarkably good job maintaining the essence of the characters. I look forward to seeing where you take this. This was my favorite unresolved situation in the game. Why was Sis mute? Was she terrified by what she saw from Albatross when she was very young. The kind of trauma that pushes all thought and feeling so deep that only action remains? Is Sis the sacrifice to the world through the internet hacking G22 is known for? Was she the scapegoat to through Interpol off the track of the real saboteurs? Well, those were my thoughts during my playthroughs. Looking forward to yours.