I Love this! Awesome job, love!

This is gorgeous. The way you've fused myth and the canon of Black Butler universe is amazing, making for a very promising beginning to a great story. I hope you continue this someday.

WHAT? Only two chapters? Update this!

Very original! Love it :) It think your writing style is very good! I could really feel the pain and lonelyness of Sebastian (and the others) Hope you update soon, so we can find out why their Father chose to banish them from Heaven.

*dies* the mythology you've constructed here is just WOW. you've clearly done your homework. i really enjoyed this one. i think you've done a particularly good job rendering Hell. i can quite literally see the story unfold. i can't wait for the next chapter.

This sounds like a start to a great and original story! I love your pre-canon world, especially how you started right after they fell from heaven.

Please update soon!

update soon D

*smirk* interesting...NOW UPDATE!

OMG I love this! Pls continue!

great beginning! Please continue!

Nice buildup, a lot of imagination. I want to see how you develop Claude and Sebastian's relationship.

Off to a very promising start. I can't wait to read more and see where you take this!

YEEEEESSSSS. Oh fuck YES. o

It's so hard to find any good Sebastian/Claude these days. Don't get me wrong, I do love me a good Sebastian/Ciel or Claude/Alois, but there's something about the two butlers together that just gets my inner fangirl going. _ And this, this was AMAZING. The detail of the two of them as Things, Sebastian writhing in pain and screaming, the Assembly, Hades...I could see it all in my mind. You have an excellent way with words, madam.

The part with the broken halos just broke my heart. TT Poor boys. And Claude being the good angel, and Sebastian as the messed-up one, just fits so perfectly with canon for some reason. I could swoon.

I'm greedy when I find something I like. MOAR PLEASE! XD XD XD XD

Wow this is deep. I had once expressed that Sebastian & Claude (Hannah too) had known each other since the beginning (like being thrown out out of Heaven beginning) it seems I'm not the only one! I know this follows pre-cannon, but when you put it into perspective that makes the ending of the second season even more tragic for these two.

I can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the good work!

Wow. Just wow.

I needes to take my time to completly take in all you dash out. This is beautiful written, as anything you do for the matter, but also I think's so fucking interesting that I'm mouthwatering for the next chapter.

Please, update asap.