Wow, what a fantastic story. I really liked the different point of view you gave. I, probably like everyone else thought the POV was edwards, and even by the end of the story, we still don't know who it could be .. Jasper or Jake. Anyway, i really enjoyed this story! what a nice change from what i usually read

I absolutely loved this!

Amazing!

J... Jacob. I think. Is it?

Loved it!

Fantastic story! I was completely caught off gaurd when I realized that the story was being told from J's perspective. I'm assuming that J is for James, though it could easily be for Jasper as well. It's rare for a story to have such deep and captivating plot line within such few chapters, but yours did. This is definitely one of my favourite stories from this fandom!

I was soooo sure it was James, esp during the obsessive/ stalkerish phase. But now...I think it should be Jasper - the guy certainly redeemed himself.

I am going to run off now and see who J really is :)

And Edward is such a cutie in this story. Really really loved it! There are very few and very rare stories of E&B entirely narrated by another character in fanfic and I think this one is one of the best :)

I'm slightly confused... if Bella is such a good person, why did she tease "J"? Why did she "rub herself all over him"? That couldn't have been imagined... actually I hate her character, she seems like such a word that rhymes with witch

I have no words.

I honestly can't even tell you how great this story is.

But thank-you, I will sleep better tonight after reading this haha

Yay! Brotherly love.

This is such an excellent story :) Such a great read!

That was such an outstanding fic. I loved everything about it and It as an amazing thing to witness J's transformation. Beautifully written! Thanks so much for sharing.

Whew. wow. I am so glad Edward and J were able to get everything out and settled between them. I think things will be looking up for J and I really hope he finds his girl. But mostly I hope they continue to be a good family.

This was a great little story, M. :)

Aw, that was a really sweet proposal. And I'm glad J at least kinda realizes he still has some changing to do.

This has been such an intriguing story! You've done a great job with it. :)

I hope J can find his own Bella :(

Ok, so I'm happy to say I did figure out that Bella was NOT playing the game. I figured J was delutional. I almost feel bad for him. And now I'm really intrigued to see how this wraps up.

And I just love how you write. You always suck me right in, lol. Doesn't matter if it is with drama or humor. I'm trapped. And I like it :)

M! How have I not read this one before! I am so sorry! Some fan I am! sheesh.

Anywho, that was freaking hysterical and I'm so glad Edward is the brother! LOLOL!

But...is he going to keep going after Bella? It says drama and angst. Lots of angst? lol. I hope we get an HEA. But I love your writing, so I'll take the risk and dive into this one.

WOW, this was amazing!