That was such an outstanding fic. I loved everything about it and It as an amazing thing to witness J's transformation. Beautifully written! Thanks so much for sharing.

Whew. wow. I am so glad Edward and J were able to get everything out and settled between them. I think things will be looking up for J and I really hope he finds his girl. But mostly I hope they continue to be a good family.

This was a great little story, M. :)

Aw, that was a really sweet proposal. And I'm glad J at least kinda realizes he still has some changing to do.

This has been such an intriguing story! You've done a great job with it. :)

I hope J can find his own Bella :(

Ok, so I'm happy to say I did figure out that Bella was NOT playing the game. I figured J was delutional. I almost feel bad for him. And now I'm really intrigued to see how this wraps up.

And I just love how you write. You always suck me right in, lol. Doesn't matter if it is with drama or humor. I'm trapped. And I like it :)

M! How have I not read this one before! I am so sorry! Some fan I am! sheesh.

Anywho, that was freaking hysterical and I'm so glad Edward is the brother! LOLOL!

But...is he going to keep going after Bella? It says drama and angst. Lots of angst? lol. I hope we get an HEA. But I love your writing, so I'll take the risk and dive into this one.

WOW, this was amazing!

Fun story! I like the characterization and honesty of it. :)

naaawww.

*happy sigh* THIS is what a short story should be. Well done.

Perfect. What a great little story so well told.

Wow. Good job, J. That really was perfect.

I'm glad he's getting sober and i hope those hidden bits of booze don't come back to haunt him.

Wow. Poor guy. And yet, he's skirting such a dangerous line. Obsession. I was glad when he realized what Bella said was true because it took the danger element out of it.

By the by, Edward and Bella's relationship is gorgeous. So beautiful.

Not unlike a deck of cards, the narrator of this story keeps flipping in my head. I didn't want to think of him as Emmett or Jasper, but you know, those are Edward's brothers. But I rather think it's James. The characterization is FLAWLESS for a James.

This story is so very intriguing.

So my friend literally would not stop pestering me until I started reading this...and through the whole first chapter, I was sending her texts going "the narrator better not be Edward... if this narrator is Edward I am flouncing right the fudge now"

But i honestly didn't think it was. Characterization made it impossible for the brother to be anyone BUT Edward.

I got even more comfortable when Bella was introduced.

LOVE. HER.

LOOOOOOOVVVVVVE HER.

Did i mention that I love her?

When she said he could have her number for Edward... I fucking cheered. Out loud. People stared.

Sold... onward.