|Reviews for The Ace of Spades|
| movieandbookgirl 3/11/12 . chapter 5
That was such an outstanding fic. I loved everything about it and It as an amazing thing to witness J's transformation. Beautifully written! Thanks so much for sharing.
| Bells. Just Bells 3/5/12 . chapter 5
Whew. wow. I am so glad Edward and J were able to get everything out and settled between them. I think things will be looking up for J and I really hope he finds his girl. But mostly I hope they continue to be a good family.
This was a great little story, M. :)
| Bells. Just Bells 3/5/12 . chapter 4
Aw, that was a really sweet proposal. And I'm glad J at least kinda realizes he still has some changing to do.
This has been such an intriguing story! You've done a great job with it. :)
| Bells. Just Bells 3/5/12 . chapter 3
I hope J can find his own Bella :(
| Bells. Just Bells 3/5/12 . chapter 2
Ok, so I'm happy to say I did figure out that Bella was NOT playing the game. I figured J was delutional. I almost feel bad for him. And now I'm really intrigued to see how this wraps up.
And I just love how you write. You always suck me right in, lol. Doesn't matter if it is with drama or humor. I'm trapped. And I like it :)
| Bells. Just Bells 3/5/12 . chapter 1
M! How have I not read this one before! I am so sorry! Some fan I am! sheesh.
Anywho, that was freaking hysterical and I'm so glad Edward is the brother! LOLOL!
But...is he going to keep going after Bella? It says drama and angst. Lots of angst? lol. I hope we get an HEA. But I love your writing, so I'll take the risk and dive into this one.
| nztwilightfan 2/20/12 . chapter 5
WOW, this was amazing!
| Daintress 1/6/12 . chapter 5
Fun story! I like the characterization and honesty of it. :)
| BlindLittleRain 1/1/12 . chapter 5
| Draenator 12/16/11 . chapter 5
*happy sigh* THIS is what a short story should be. Well done.
| LyricalKris 12/11/11 . chapter 5
Perfect. What a great little story so well told.
| LyricalKris 12/11/11 . chapter 4
Wow. Good job, J. That really was perfect.
I'm glad he's getting sober and i hope those hidden bits of booze don't come back to haunt him.
| LyricalKris 12/11/11 . chapter 3
Wow. Poor guy. And yet, he's skirting such a dangerous line. Obsession. I was glad when he realized what Bella said was true because it took the danger element out of it.
By the by, Edward and Bella's relationship is gorgeous. So beautiful.
| LyricalKris 12/11/11 . chapter 2
Not unlike a deck of cards, the narrator of this story keeps flipping in my head. I didn't want to think of him as Emmett or Jasper, but you know, those are Edward's brothers. But I rather think it's James. The characterization is FLAWLESS for a James.
This story is so very intriguing.
| LyricalKris 12/11/11 . chapter 1
So my friend literally would not stop pestering me until I started reading this...and through the whole first chapter, I was sending her texts going "the narrator better not be Edward... if this narrator is Edward I am flouncing right the fudge now"
But i honestly didn't think it was. Characterization made it impossible for the brother to be anyone BUT Edward.
I got even more comfortable when Bella was introduced.
Did i mention that I love her?
When she said he could have her number for Edward... I fucking cheered. Out loud. People stared.