I love this. Last of the Mohicans is easily one of my favorites but I've always wished there were more Alice/Uncas moments. Thank you for this! I will be eagerly awaiting more

I did enjoy this chapter very much, though I do wish there would be more Alice/Uncas interactions. Can't wait for your next one!

you finally updated! thank you so much, I cant wait to read more

Hope you continue to write and develop Alice's story.

Argh, it was just getting to the meat of the story! Very well written. I know you abandoned this quite some time ago, but I'd love to read more. *crosses fingers* Fun little fact about the movie: at the waterfall where uncas holds alice they shared a kiss but it was cut out of the final montage. In the scene after that however, Alice is seen walking with a braid that wasn't there before, put in by Uncas.

I like this version of the script so much!

Hope you to update it soon.

More more more please!

Yum, that was a chapter worth waiting for. Love how you have Alice misinterpreting Uncas' holding back as not liking her. What will happen next?

Love it! Can't wait for the rest. And I agree with the others: please let them live.

omg... ch 14! thank you, can't wait for more

Ooh, that was a lovely little chapter full of Uncas-Alice goodness. Love the evolution of her innner monologue vis-a-vis her feelings towards him and the hug...

this is awesome story, exactly what the movie should have been like. I really love it! keep writing and please please please PLEASE do not kill Alice & Uncas, I want them to be happy for a long time! they are my favourite movie couple :) p.s. sorry for my bad english, Im a foreigner

I'm enjoying reading the script and it's changes. This is a favoritie movie of mine and I read anything fanfiction has to offer. I love when authors expand the Alice/Uncas relationship since there was a subtle hint of it in the movie and I always wish there had been more. Thanks for sharing your writing.

They should have used your script for the movie ! Your interpretation is great and Im amazed by your Alice and Uncas moments. Please create more of this.

I watched this movie last weekend, and loved everything about it, except the end...I almost cried! Keep writing, and if its possible please don't kill Uncas and Alice (since you're writing this more about their love story anyways). But I digress because this is your fanfic and its really good so far.