I just finished the third Hunger games book yesterday :)

Lol, Riku and darkness go hand in hand XD

Wow Sephiroth taking out his problems on Riku, I wonder if his siblings think it's justice...

I guess that beating just show that he cares, he just wants to keep Riku with him :) - :/

So that's why he's going to resort to that...

Lol so now he's got Xehanort looking for him XD

I don't blame Riku for being in a bad mood... :(

Aw, I feel bad for Riku. Kairi was mean to be happy about Riku's outburst...

I think i remember this from Addicted now...

Lol so he has to stay there forever? XD

Lol is that Vince as in Vincent? The guy who raped Kairi?

Wow and now Riku'll have to go see the guy...

Lol at Xehanort wanting Kadaj shot. That was brave of Riku to say no! :)

Lol did his brothers stop visiting because he's a dead man walking? XD

Riku was pretty nice to Sora...

awwwwwwwwwwwww poooooooooooooooooooooooooor riku! i feel so bad now! anyway cant wait to see whwat this workout will be like!

! O.O That was totally unexpected! I swear, when Riku finds out who Vincent is and what he'd done to Kairi, he'll be MURDEROUS. I thought it was wierd when I saw Vincent's name on the list of your poll, but now I understnd why. I CAN'T BELIEVE HE'S BACK!

Okay, Vincent freak-out moment over :D

Now, 'bout the chapter . . .

Hey, BTW, every time I read an update, the song Apologize by *I think* One Republic gets stuck in my head.

Okay. Random.

NOW about the chappy.

I think it was pretty cool. It's horrible how Sephiroth treats Riku. And, when Sephiroth told Riku that he's never gonna move out (or something along those lines) I immediately thought of Tangled. Ya know, where Gothel tells Rapunzel that she's not leaving the tower, ever. . . .

Well. Okay. I'm in a wierd mood today.

Anyway, I feel so sorry for Riku. His friends aren't exactly even his friends, and he has no one to talk to about his problems besides Sora. And Kairi, too, probably. Like, WAY later.

And his brothers . . . Dang, it was a real shocker how . . . nice Kadaj was being. Wierd.

Well, I guess the crap has just hit the fan. I mean, the trilogy was interesting before, but now its getting REAL intense :)

Can't wait for the next update!

Oh, and good luck with finding awesome new friends who are as cool as your old ones :oD I know it sucks when you have to look for new friends.

awesome as usual. this was a pretty dark chapter, but hey thats Riku for ya. the bit at the end where they were swimming just made me laugh so much. you're good for that. i enjoy Sora's noodliness of a body though XD whats the difference with HD? loner huh...just speak french to them and they'll think you're awesome. i know i would. :] wait, i already do :D

Holy sh**, Nami's boyfriend is a drug dealer! O I didn't see that one coming... Okay, so it hasn't been confirmed that he IS one, but I just kinda figured. I still think Riku's a tool, even after reading this story so far. -.- But I like it D It really helps me understand more of what's going on in this trilogy! Awsome job! D

Yo! I've been meaning to review this story for AGES but I've been held up, sorry!

It's got a great plot, really interesting twists and turns, I've read all the DCT stories and they areal worth more tenfold of the reviews you already get [which are a lot :)] You have great talent and I can't wait for your updates. Oh, and Sora Kairi 4TW! (sorry, just had to put it out there) I wonder if Kairi will ever tell Sora about her past... And if Sora is going to become hot(ter, according to Kairi) as he continues working out with Riku... And if Sora and Riku will become the best friends they are... All these questions for you. But you can't answer :( Ah well!

Shame about Penelo though, I wonder if Vaan will ever tell her...? And Roxas and Namine, still wondering how that'll play out. Hero::Heroine is great as well (I pretty much went through your channel, I know, creepy) But you deserve all the favorites, and reviews from everyone. You deserve more than what you get!

Constructive stuff:

Nothing much to say here... Just...um... Try to make Sora less of a wimp? I dunno, that's part of his character I guess! OOH! I know! Add a kiss between Hiroshima and Yuuki in the play! XD! Um. Yeah that's it...?

I'll copy and paste this review into your other DCT stories, you get more credit that way! XD!

And please PM me! For no reason but I like getting 'em!

Keep writing!

TheShallowAbyss

(P.S. [I know, THERE'S MORE?] But I was curious...Did you get Sora's side of the story [a.k.a. the Book] from Meg Cabot's: How to Be Popular, when you're a social reject like me Steph Laundry?)

FRIENDSHIP!

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'

XD i completely LOL'D at kairi when she was laughing at sora and Riku- My parents now think i'm a weirdo XD oh well. i loved this chapter- probably one of my favourite chapters in this series, especially, when sora and riku talk at the beach and the last part of this chapter.i can't wait to read the next chapter in this series. :D

Awsome job spellbound _ keep up the good work and i hope your move to the US goes well

Dear god. I think I just had a literature-orgasm.

OMGOMGOMGOMG! There's was so much bromance here (and some RiKainess to balance) that I think I can die and go to Bromance Heaven. I'm pretty sure it exists. It must exist... Or else I'll be screwed when I die.

Anyway, it was nice as always to see the point of view of Riku. It's cool to see how he truly feels about some things Sora and Kairi do.

Also the ending just made me go "aawwwwww". It's so full of... Bromance!

Huh... Huh... Shit, typing on the phone is hard.

Also, sorry about not reviewing. I've been traveling and only got to use the internet today...

Anyway, I'm waiting for the next chapter!

Hope everything goes we- BOOYAH!

Oh,uh,hey,hehe...oh god whats wrong with me!I keep on reviewing late,get drunk and almost get gayified while being drunk(read the review my freind made on Addicted to know more and he used my name since I got drunk,not my real name but my pen name-oh god Im ramblin and you probably dont care so ill start the review)Review startin Time!

This chappie really had more bro bondin and Riku's now getting his day all happy by Sora's name? just made me think wow Riku you must really love the the Paopu fruit moment wasn't as funny as the Addicted but it really did help me learn about Riku's weak if I meet Riku,I'll make him eat all the Paopu fruit in the world!*insert maniac/evil laugh here except in a retarted highly doped person choking on a penguin/monkey's fart here*Also Drunk Yuna getting Tidus to get super mega horny was hilarious and a Drunk Ashe was makin out with Riku with bubble gum in her mouth*crowd goes,"EWWWWWW"*,and then Selphie comes to save the day*crowd goes,"YAAAAAAAY"*,and hey that rhymes._ Also Ashe kissin reminds me of the time when Robert was still straight and HE had a THREE-WAY KISS WITH TWO GIRLS WHICH HAD STOLE THE GUM IN HIS MOUTH BY ENDING THE KISS,LETTING THE GUM DROP TO THE FLOOR AND EATIN THE GUM TOGETHER!THOSE GIRLS WERE WILD AND INSANE AND THEY MADE ME BLURT OUT IN FRONT OF THE WHOLE SCHOOL,WTF? and i got in trouble by the principal who i chose to throw rasins to fireworks again,showed their freindship bondin in another CHAPTER I SAY GREAT CHAPTER!Welll I gotta go trow rasins at passing bystanders so see ya!ThatKid10001

Aw, I loved the ending of this chapter. At first I just thought Riku was a jerk. Albeit, a hilarious jerk, but a jerk nonetheless. But I think Riku's grown on me, because reading from his POV is my favorite. :)

Love it! Update soon please! :D

Very nice, like always

I'm not gonna lie. That last line just made my day!

that was sweet